Please update soon! I need to know what happens next.

such a good story! And you just left it like that! so sad!

:C YOU DIDN'T CONTINUE! NOOOOOO~!

please update!

If you don't update, I will send a wave of mary-sues against you

Please please please continue this! i will fall into the abyss if you dont! this story is sooo intresting! i love it sooo much! and not show use why it is rated T! /

I cant wait for the update.

This is going really well. It's not the typical vampire story and I'm really looking forward to the update. loooooooool Oz will get Gil pregnant :'D

Well, I have to say I'm impressed.

When I read the words "Gil" and "Impregnated" and "Vampire", I had my doubts, but you have gladly proved me wrong.

But... don't get to graphic on me, alright? I mean... O.O As much as I love Oz and Gil, I don't want to be reading about Oz raping Gil. Please, for the love of all that's holy, say "And at the sight of those green eyes, I blacked out" and make it a time gap. I beg of you, I have enough nightmares as is! XD

But I love your writing style! _ It's nice and detailed!

Oh, but one more thing... was that an epically short one-day class or what? XD I know Break likes to keep thing short and sweet but...

Oh, and he has both eyes? So, Alyss doesn't play a part in his life yet? Will she in the future? Or has she been cut from the fanfic? XD

Well, keep on writing,

~LaFTA

P.S: Oh, and I figured out what Break is...

He's a unicorn, isn't he?

Very nice~ :D

I liked it a lot *O* Keep it up!

OMG this story was EPIC! You had me hooked with the first few lines, and that's saying something, since it usually takes me awile to get into a story. I love how you've got the characteres, and then twisted the story into your own creation- I mean, there's vampires and everything! Keep writing!