WIERD SHE GOT FUCKED BY ASH AND BLAZKIN

Perhaps if you write more, you will get a BETTER job...

Thanxs for using my idea. And I have another idea Ash X Anabel.

Great story, especially the Blaziken part and this. It got me horny, that's for sure, which means you're good at this. You mentioned something about only one person giving requests, so I'll be the second. Have Kenny and his Machoke stumble upon Dawn alone, and play with her. She begins to like it, though she protested at first.

its nurse joy, not the officer!

Well first let me say that dispite the long wait, I am still

a fan of this story. Also heres another suggestion Growlithe

male and Jenny.

Interesting.

~Stormy

ahem, my apologies, but when i said this story was nice, i meant everything excluding the lemon part. not a fan of lemon at all, but love pokemon,eheh, sorry about that. ; i skipped over the lemon.

well, i never! i am a total fan of bidoof and have a wonderful bibarel friend in my main team. not that i'm offended,just wanted to let you know there are bidoof and bibarel fans out there, and i'm one of em. (actually, i'm the only one i know of...ah wells.) :D cools story btw, shapter 1 was nice too

Oi oi oi, that sounds like a good setup. I was kinda relieved there was no Lemon, if someone had walked in on me reading one, it would be AKWARD... lol.

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That's Bob... lol.

...you double posted one... but nice work, and work on the summary (The public one)

Clearly a mistake has been made,chapter 2 is the same as chapter 1

Hm... interesting chapter make another one soon and here is an idea for next chapter do a Blaziken and may pairing but have Ash walk in on them. HA!HA!HA!

Nice start