This is an absolutely awesome fic. The plot was good, the characters were right, it was PERFECT. Thank you so much for writing!:D

you have the makings of a good writer/author

Good Story...on chap 11...Love the Hitchikers Guid refrence

Again, as well as in all your story great collocation with Terry Pratchett. Although I have been waiting for one man, who will step over the line, telling the others they are just fools and after that joining the enemy. :)

Oh, and one more word - thank you, THANK YOU, for including "sim-wine" and not wine. Fairies DO NOT DRINK (remember the sprite in THE VERY FIRST CHAPTER of BOOK ONE, all you OOC drunk-Holly writers? Yeah. I thought not.)

The more I reread this, the more brilliant you seem. It's like you're channeling Colfer - no, change that, it's like you're improving on Colfer. Cheers, cheers, cheers!

You should take over writing the books from Eoin Colfer... /faints due to brilliantness of story/

Aw. It's really over! I'm still in awe at your writing prowess and your beta's expertise at editing. I loved all your chapters that you posted and I'm just going to review them all at once.

I was shocked when Cahartez was revealed, but he does seem like a very plausible villain. It was an excellent plot twist!

The last few chapters were a tiny bit anticlimactic. There was no epic final fight scene that I had been looking forward to, but that is honestly the only thing I would change.

I particularly enjoyed the ending, and I thought it was very clever how you tied the plot details into the events of TAI. It was a nice spin on one of Colfer's more brilliant ideas.

I have loved reading this fic, and I hope you (and your beta!) will continue to post in this fandom.

Congratulations on writing what might just be the best piece of fanfiction I have ever read!

~bubbles

Heh heh. Sorry about the last review *sheepish face*. I was too busy reading to check and see that it had ACTUALLY BEEN FINISHED ALREADY like the IDIOT I AM...

N/E way, I'm still reading, and still obsessed. This is AMAZING! And by the way, r/e the A/H shippers killing you about Artemis's phone? I, for one, as a shipper, am thanking you...so many opportunities for angst... hee hee hee :)

Your official (and embarrassed) fan,

psychegurl

Hm...A/H goodness, and REFERENCES! WHE! ("almost, but not quite, entirely unlike tea..." :)

So...UPDATE SOON! Or I will hurt you severely, and you do NOT want a Juliet-sized teenager with Butler-sized parents coming after you.

Bresniv...heh, heh, heh. I love puns, and historical references, so this chapter was a favorite. And the fic...a BIG favorite! You're an incredible writer, and I eagerly anticipate more.

Wow, I love the way that you ended this and when I read it last night I suddenly realised that this makes Opal Koboi's (future) plans all make sense - which is completely brilliant - and I wouldn't be surprised of Colfer puts the same sort of thing into the next book (if there is one. And I will also say now that I think I'll like your version of it better)

As for the phones (which I would have reviewed about in the chapter were Artemis' got squished but I think that four reviews is enough spam for one day :P) I'm glad that his got squashed (get ready for childishness) because I am the exact opposite of an AH-er :) And if Holly finds him another one, I will personally find it and squash it myself!

I absolutely love this story and I think that it is definitely one of the best in the AF fan fiction realm. I can't wait to see more of your writing (no matter how long it takes for you to get some free time) and good luck in uni! (And now I have succesfully spammed your inbox back :grins:)

-Jess-

Now this is my fav chapter! :) (well this and the next of course, but I thought I would try to keep the spamming of your inbox to down - a little bit)

I actually cracked up laughing when Trouble got the Pig Blaster (nice name for the gun too) and it wasn't very smart for me to be laughing at 1 in the morning because I was most definitely meant to be asleep!

When I think of this part (well this one and the part in the next chapter) I'm reminded of a scene from a movie called Hot Fuzz (you probably haven't seen it, but anyway) where the main character (who happens to be a policeman too) raids the weapons lock up at his station and takes back the village from a council of corrupted villagers (which included his superior officer) I think that maybe have been part of the reason why I was laughing :P

Oh, and Iris saying "he's so bad ass" was my favourite line.

Now this is one of my favourite chapters (my absolute favourite is a little bit after this one I think) probably because it involves Trouble and Foaly in the same place (they're my two favourite characters) I also like the way that you have been building on Iris' character, she is most definitely not a mary-su :)

Okay, I'll just say now that I will definitely not be able to review all of these amazing chapters because my fingers will fall off (and I don't want that to happen because I sort of need them :P)

The next thing that I will say is, yes I did change my pen name but it still has the word "beetle" in it so people shouldn't be too confused...hopefully.

And the last is that I had my modem confiscated by my parents and when I got it back I had 28 new emails and quite a few of them were alerts for this - which made me very happy because I love this story :)

Now, I read this all last night (12pm - 1 or 2am to be exact-ish) and I'm going to go through the chapters now and probably comment on my favourite bits (and there were a lot of them so I don't think I'll comment on all of them :P) And I'll probably stick a review on the last chapter too.

-Jess-