| Reviews for Façade |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2013 Ha, GAYYYYY! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/9/2013 I like all ur stories u are a amazing writer and realy seem tocapture characters, U should write more snake and meryl stories |
| sootythunder chapter 9 . 12/8/2011 hey this is pretty good would love to see you pick this up again |
 for god sakes evrythings taken chapter 9 . 8/7/2009 Whos the girl hes hiitn on? |
| carnegieotaconwolfie chapter 9 . 8/5/2009 i just read the whole story in less than 30 minutes. lol. other than its current length, they'res nothing wrong with it. the story is awesome, totally in canon. everything. loved it. 3 -glomp- |
| Soldier's Shadow chapter 9 . 8/3/2009 Y'know this was a pretty amusing chapter. You write drunken characters pretty good. My favorite part of this entire fic though is Meryl's characterization, you're one of the few people I know that can write a good Meryl Silverburgh. On another note, the previous chapter of this fic was also amazing, I adored all the angst you filled it with. Stellar job! Boss |
| Ultimolu chapter 9 . 8/3/2009 Snake is so in character in this story. There were parts that made me sniffle a bit. Very, very well written. |
| ggreen7295 chapter 9 . 7/30/2009 Someting about this story. makes me question. Great so far, really deep. DON'T STOP THIS STORY |
| carnegieotaconwolfie chapter 1 . 7/29/2009 great, great start. but Snake to talk a bit more...snakish...the man who believes all he is is a killer, and oozes sarcasm when faced with a too serious person. other than that, its awesome. |
| Chappi-Chappy chapter 9 . 7/26/2009 Haha! Crazy drunk Snake! Short and sweet chapter as always. Keep it up! |
| SaradocCraver101 chapter 9 . 7/26/2009 I love it and keep it up. _ |
| LadySnake chapter 8 . 5/27/2009 I speak spanish but i'm reading yous Story becouse i love it..! please continue..! |
| Strikeman EXE chapter 6 . 2/18/2009 Ah... Finally, some cheer in this chapter! I really like the progression of the days. I'm kinda sad though that it would come to an end at 31 days though... This is just me, maybe, but I think the chapters are a little short. I like a little more substance, more dialogue or action, and character development. But, if you're insisting on this style, really short chapters, I won't complain. You've done a really good job with this fan-fic! I look forward to the rest of it! ~ |
| YaoiSongstress07 chapter 8 . 2/8/2009 Note to self: NEVER LISTEN TO NARNIA SOUNDTRACKS WHILE READING ZEPHYR'S WORK. Seriously, listening to the 'Prince Caspian' soundtrack while reading this was a BAD idea. It brought me to tears. The connection between Meryl and Dave rules the galaxy. This chapter was incredibly inspirational for me and 'Surrender', so expect to see a similiar conversation between Dante and Old Snake in the future. Having said that, I am all too happy to report my adoration for this. This chapter was brilliantly sweet, painful and eloquent. Provocative, tear-jerking and amazingly emotional. |
| Writer43 chapter 8 . 2/8/2009 I just sign into my email account and seconds later, an update! Naturally, I jumped on it! You're writing in general has really improved, looking back at Damnation and then reading this. It just flows really well, you're in control of everything in the chapter. Or so it seems. Unless you're like me and end up getting told by the characters what to write! If you're stuck for ideas, how about a little more conflict? The trips down memory lane are nice, but when people are highly strung it can lead to arguements too. Saiph |
