Aw

Wirting a fanfanfic about sasuke he sure have a bigger role

Wirting a fanfanfic about sacuke

Wow, this is pretty good! Definitely very different from anything I've read, and now I'm VERY curious as to what happened with Itachi, Kakashi, Naruto and Sakura. What kind of conflict did they have? I'm curious! Ah, whatever. This story was really quite good, even if Kisame acted strange and OOC. Oh well. I like it, keep writing!

That was very amusing but you should have wrote about when Itachi, Kakashi, Naruto and Sakura met up, nice job

Well done! It was good that you kept them in charachter so well, and you gave me a new view on Kisame. :)

wow I really enjoyed it!

Aww another sweet story! I never would of suspected sasuke n kasami bt it turned out nice!

o i wonder what happened in that cave where Itachi and the others were

Well, that was good. A bit clumsy, I think, because I just can't imagine the antisocial leave-me-alone-I'm-not-speaking-to-you Sasuke to open up to anyone, much less his homicidal brother's partner... and also because I think that Kisame's a bit more perceiptive, epecially about Itachi, and both Uchihas are so alike it's almost frightening.

Also: the reason why Sasuke doesn't let anyone take care of him is because it makes him feel weak, and that drives him absolutely crasy. Remember the family history and conclude the huge inferiority complex approximately the size of the Pacific Ocean. Well, that's my opinion, anyway, and Sasuke wouldn't have admitted it even to himself...

Still, that was good. There aren't much stories that have no pairing and are still good.

P.S.: thirteen is an unlucky number *wink*.

very nice, Kisame doesnt seam as bad.

This was wonderful! D I love it! :D

I was misled by posting my review, my review for this story is in "As Much As You Think" ... Which proves that I am officially clumsy, lol. Otherwise ... I love your story, the idea was well found.

nice

i really like this story its not bad at all :D