:)

This was excellent.

I love this! This was my favorite episode, and I loved the way you showed Aang and Zuko's thoughts- very well written :)

Interesting :D

I really like this fic. Pretty near the beginning, I decided Zuko was my favorite character. He's such an intriguing character. He doesn't really know the part he's supposed to play and he hates himself for it. He wishes to make his father proud but doesn't seem to realize that, in all the ways that matter, his uncle is more his father than his father is. He's so angry, but it's just because he's confused. I think I'd be the same way if I were in his position.

Okay, I'm done talking about why Zuko's my fave. Great job, this fic is very well-written and accurate. I can never get fics for something with a character that I think is pure awesomeness to follow the right timeline, so I'll probably never post any A:TLA fics I come up with on here.

my my my...god!

i loved it! i really hoped that Zuko would join the gaang, but, it never happened!

Let the dreamer dream his dream and realize that this dream is where he shall find satcuary. Those with ambation will find salvation in the end within their dreams that are within there hearts. Zuko needs Aang and Aang needs Zuko. Both have scares that need healing and it be better to do it with each other. It was not mere chance or roll of the dice that they met it was fate. You should never question fate.

Gaah, the angst of it all.

Love.

Aww. I loved "The Blue Spirit," and I am hoping for an eventual friendship between Zuko and Aang.

You did a great job with the characters. Zuko's italicized thoughts? quotes? at the end seem rather scattered, but that could possibly be done purposefully to mirror his confusion.

Good job; it would be nice if you could write more Zuko/Aang. XD

"The Blue Spirit" is on of my favorite Avatar episodes. I love the interplay between Any and Zuko. You did a really good job of cpaturing the thoughts and feelings of the episode. Thanks

wow that was amazing. best avatar story i have read yet.

mel

One hundred eleven (1) ellipses (...s) seems a bit excessive.

Other than that, quite nice. n_n

Have a nice day,

~ Morga

that was good. is this just a oneshot or is it gonna coutiue? it was really good though.

I like this. It is very good. I wish I could keep the characters in character when I type. You do it very well. Any pointers?

This was very sweet. I thought both characters were In Character. You're going on my author alerts.