| Reviews for Harry Potter and Dr Granger's Observation |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/6 This was oddly nice lol didn’t think I’d enjoy this small read but I did... great one shot |
 xianiaHarMione chapter 1 . 5/6 Thanks for sharing this story... I surely miss Broomstick flyer as well... |
| tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 4/27 This was a wonderful outline or summary, but as a story, it feels lacking. We're just told everything that happens rather than taken along with a narrative and allowed to experience it with the characters. If you fleshed it out it would make a truly wonderful tale. |
| BillBrink chapter 1 . 4/18 Very nicely done! Thank you so much for sharing this fine work with us. |
| Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 1/22 Cute story! |
| bones71 chapter 1 . 1/21 Thank you for an excellent story it had everything a great story should have. I loved your depiction of Dumbledork you hit his character right on the nail. Whilst reading this I could definitely feel Broomsticks influence. Congratulations on getting this added to the Memorial. |
| siobhan.22 chapter 1 . 9/27/2019 Great story |
| yaoiaiss chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 Great Story Great Reading |
| jilumasam chapter 1 . 7/10/2019 Lovely story. Thanks for writing:) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 Excellent story. |
| LUNA chapter 1 . 3/2/2019 dumbledores confidence is at an all time LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW LOW sorry I love dish song |
| GBTtown chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 Good story and I agree and heartily approve of your A/N. She is missed. |
| Ariadne Venegas chapter 1 . 2/4/2019 I really like it! I would have like to know a little more of them in Australia... As maybe Harry went in to enchanting and runes and have a workshop with brooms and motocicles made upon request or something...? Or maybe he decided to be teacher after the kids grown? Or a little other tibidit of something, it was too short that part, I think. |
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 1/6/2019 A solid one-shot here! Thanks for posting it! |
| Dementor149 chapter 1 . 12/23/2018 Thank you for posting this. I enjoyed it very much! Your style and prose impressed me from the start, then I hit "fait-accompli" and thought "Wow, literate French!" Joy, bliss, and ecstasy all in one neat package. As I read I wondered if you dealt with bureaucracy in your living or were just one amazing researcher, it is so redolent of my dealings with it. I am in awe of your dialogue, I have so much trouble with that in my own attempts at story telling. All of your characterizations are very well done. The only problem I had in reading your story was your tendency to tense errors, slipping from past into present tense makes your prose read like stage directions. "The gold must flow"? Fan of Dune, perhaps? The Neosporin joke had me rolling too. Congrats on you being added to Minion's memorial to Broomstick Flyer, I can see the resemblance to her stories. Once again, thanks for this it has been a very pleasant couple of hours. - Dementor149. |
