This story is beautiful. I have no other words for it. Beautiful.

This was really nice, thank you for the great story!

this was amazing and perfect and... amazing

i love lily and james being the superhero and the villain but not know it was each other, it was so cute watching them from the outside

this whole story was wild and made me smile :)))) loved it

This was amazing! I love the fact that the Muggles had wizards and witches categorized as 'Super Hero' and 'Super Villon'.

And Lily and James being the other's rival! Cliche and amazing and perfect!

Lily conjuring Flowers as her power is just perfect! (I know, I keep using perfect, but that's what happens when you stumble across perfection!)

(Remus joining in on the fun simply because this time it was brilliantly done is just gorgeous. I giggled so hard.)

I have no words for how perfect this story is. I don't even know where to start because this is the most amazing...

Ahem. I would say the best bit is Moony tying up Flower Girl whilst apologising to her. That had me laughing so much.

Great and original idea. I've seen this prompt on tumblr but haven't actually seen anyone write it before and the outcome was perfect. I like that Lily and James were married and he actually had antlers on his head - how perfect.

I love how you mixed magical and muggle world here, that you've kept the Marauders as their Marauder names and I especially love that you made the villains so villainy! (I mean, Tom was arrested for villainy, totally laughed at that!)

Great job!

The Marauders are my world and life. You write them perfectly. I love it when people write them so well; your characterisation in general is spot on and I enjoyed reading the intereactions between characters the most. I really. James I thought was particularly stand outish. I can’t say I’m a super fan of this AU but otherwise you did amazing to adhere to all the prompts your had listed at the top. There was a nice flow and wonderful plot line. Amazing stuff xx

This made me laugh out loud which is a bit embarrassing since I was on a bus.

This was just playful, light, happy... you so clearly crafted a workd, I love how you trusted your reader enough to just say that muggles and wizarding folk knew about each other.

This was beautiful and so creative with the different calling signs each hero/villain had, the way you pulled in canon knowledge and elements before delightfully moulding them to fit your universe.

Thank you for cheering me up on a tough day, I loved this.

I'm so impressed with this. I've never been able to write Superhero!AU but you did it flawlessly. It's perfect. I love the way you drew parallels with the canon we know but still made it super interesting and original at the same time.
Skills, girl!
Lily as flower girl is perfect. Like, actually perfect. And the marauders as the villains. Omg.
I don't actually have real words for this because my brain is still gushing over the brilliantness.
Seriously good job!

This was so ridiculous, and I love it. I have tried superhero!AUs before, but they always fall flat. This, however. Jenny, darling! Yes!

First off, I love that you mixed magical and superhero worlds. I don't think I've ever seen that done. I feel like it shouldn't work and yet here we are. It worked perfectly!

I love that James and Lily were actually rivals but didn't realize it. And when she finally did! Lily was flawless. I think the best bit was James realizing it and just "Well, shit."

The Marauders were brilliant villains. More like a couple of juvenile delinquents. Their crimes were hilarious.

I like that you drew parallels with canon. Everyone's alter ego matched canon, and including Peter's betrayal was perfect

The fact that this was almost like a superhero parody really made me happy.

I love this so much! I was gonna use the Jily and Superhero prompts when I thought I'd have time for Triwizard, but my god you've done it so much better than I ever could have.

I don't know where to start with this, my thoughts aren't nearly coherent enough to leave a review...

First, the whole James and Lily not knowing the others' secret identity and trying to get on with life and keep the identity secret but also being rivals is definitely a frequently used trope, but it's one I love so much and you've done it so well. I love how when James' identity was revealed Lily was all pissed off at him for keeping a secret even though she did the same thing.

Sirius being Padfoot as Prongs' sidekick was such a good inclusion. Like, of course the Marauders would be with him as a Villain. And Remus showing up and being all apologetic but still a 'villain' was so adorable, too.

AND THE SCENE IN THE HOSPITAL OH MY GOD THAT COULDN'T BE ANY CUTER IF YOU TRIED!

I just... I really loved this and I have so much more to say but I just don't know how to articulate it.

Great job :)

Ooh, this was great! I love superhero AUs, and I really enjoyed the way you actually managed to mix the magical, canon world in with your superhero/supervillain world in this story. That was awesome! :) Lily being sorta jealous of herself was a classic, and of course, Peter betrayed them to Voldemort when he got the chance (cwl)
The hospital scene was so cute and adorable and sweet, and I loved the interactions between Flower Girl and Prongs (also, those costumes sound perfect for them :p)
Loved this! :)
Cheers ;)

Oh, this is much more interesting than the other one. You seem to like making a mix of worlds instead of trying to fit it all in one world... and that's not a bad thing.

Lily and James were really good, although throughout the story it felt as if James knew of Lily's secret identity.

What I would really like now is a sequel to this, detailing how exactly Lily and James bicker, now that the cat's out of the bag.

Keep writing.

I have to say I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. At first I was a little confused as to what was going on but oddly enough I really did! I thought the prose was a little fast and loose but obviously you needed to fit in a lot without going on forever. Also it was more than a little bit cheesy but that isn’t necessarily a bad thing because it’s a cheesy superhero thing and I would have loved for them not to be married and for them to fall in love this way as superhero and super villain.
Anyhoo, I really did enjoy this and the only concrit bit was about it being a bit loose, no SPaG mistakes that I spotted.
Great job :D

OH MY! BRILLIANT! I never, and I mean never, read Jily, but you took that, added Superhero's and villains, turned everything upside down, and made it so amazing! I'm glad I got to experience reading this, and I loved that you made James the villain, and Lily the hero! This is such an original, outstanding piece of work. Something I wouldn't mind reading if you made it into a MC. There's not enough words in the world that could tell you how much I love this! Great job!

This was so cute :)