Reviews for Goodbye
orchidluv chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
Ouch that was brutal lol
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2018
Ahe sounds like a horrible person
silkyjacob chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
I Love these Jacob & Bella Happy Ever Afters...Great Job.. deadward finally got what he deserved
TinaF chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
Loved it! Thank you for sharing.
Romancingthefanger chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Nicely done
EmmaDel chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
This is good. I like the idea of Bella waking up and realizing that Edward was the wrong choice. I don't think it needs an M rating though. There was no bad language, sex, or violence, and nothing suggestive of those things.
HellWoman chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Wow! :O
Taino Delsan13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Wow nice poem
BeckieT108 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Why did it take her three years?
Wow and Jacob waited?!
She must make it up to him daily. I demand she make it up to him nightly!

Great story. Her letter was a perfect as final loveless goodbye.
Beckiet108
Zayide chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
oh damn...that was...wow...
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
So happy to see Bella leave Edward for Jake. We knew Jake would wait! Thanks for sharing whatever little drabbles or big drabbles that rattle in your head! Sweet little story!
Robin.D chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
that was good :-) :-)
brankel1 chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
I love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Love it!
springbreakers chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
That was soooo cute UGGGGH
I expected a death story in all honesty but I'm glad you spinned it the way you did
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