AmberTheCritic
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Joined 01-16-15, id: 6425324, Profile Updated: 12-17-19
Author has written 7 stories for Marvel, Undertale, Pokémon, Over the Garden Wall, and Guardians of the Galaxy.

... Well.

This is off to a fantabulastical start. I'm always so good at these things. Lemme see...

~Writer

(Nailed this description).

-I dabble in fan fiction in my spare time. Don't read it much, but like to write it. About whatever I'm engrossed in at the time. I appreciate reviews and constructive criticism, since I've gotta improve one way or another.

Welp. There we go. Have fun!

*underwhelming confetti sounds*

-Amber The Critic

(P.S. For those of you who've asked, When Raccoons Fall From the Sky is basically abandoned at this point. The story I had planned out was, simply put, bad. But it's the first thing I posted on here, plus I have a soft spot for what is actually posted, so it serves as an ancient relic of sorts :).


"Make it dark, make it grim, make it tough. But then, for the love of God, tell a joke."

-Joss Whedon


"How fleeting are all human passion compared with the massive continuity of ducks."
-Dorothy L. Sayers

"Until we have met the monsters in ourselves, we keep trying to slay them in the outer world. And we find that we cannot, for all darkness in the world stems from darkness in the heart. And it is there that we must do our work."
-Marianne Williamson
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A Hui Hou Kākou by BraviaryScout reviews
As they continue on separate paths; the newly crowned champion of Alola, Elio "Sun" Northstar looks back to remember the one person who gave him the strength he needed to complete his island challenge while he awaits her return. Pokemon Moon novelization. Sun X Lillie. Hau X OC. M for later chapters. Cover art by Chocolexii. Same universe as Brendan's Journey by jmoul18.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 68 - Words: 681,549 - Reviews: 427 - Favs: 215 - Follows: 233 - Updated: 7/31 - Published: 3/2/2017 - [Lillie, Sun] Gladion/Gladio, Hau
Old Lullabies Die Hard by L.C. Li reviews
"Since when did you know how to braid hair, Jack?" — or; Soldier 76 sees and thinks of his little girl.
Overwatch - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,989 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 250 - Follows: 56 - Published: 3/25/2017 - J. Morrison/Soldier: 76, Hana Song/D. Va - Complete
A Child Gets Stuck in a Cave by datudou reviews
Humans. Monsters. After the war, they were supposed to be separated. But somehow, a human finds her way into the underground. Will she be able to learn how to show mercy and become determined to befriend the monsters… or will she resort to fighting back? A novelization of Undertale. Female Frisk. T rating's there for action, dark themes, and general leniency.
Undertale - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 20 - Words: 112,133 - Reviews: 62 - Favs: 64 - Follows: 69 - Updated: 8/10/2016 - Published: 12/24/2015 - Frisk, Flowey
How To Buy Happiness by Prince-in-Disguise reviews
"It would have been so much easier to blame all of this on Quill (and mind you, he still might!), but if he had to be completely honest with himself, Rocket Raccoon was pretty sure the whole thing had started because he couldn't keep his claws off a great piece of artillery." Rocket is kidnapped by someone who believes that there is nothing in the world money can't buy.
Guardians of the Galaxy - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 12 - Words: 40,553 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 95 - Follows: 49 - Updated: 5/3/2015 - Published: 1/27/2015 - Rocket R. - Complete
Blue Sky by wafflestories reviews
Meteors, signals, apologies, and that tricky little thing called humanity- four years after the events of Portal II, Wheatley's been handed a second chance, but it's not going to be plain sailing…
Portal - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 15 - Words: 169,766 - Reviews: 1219 - Favs: 3,396 - Follows: 1,120 - Updated: 4/1/2012 - Published: 10/3/2011 - Wheatley, Chell - Complete
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Undertale: A Tale of Two Souls reviews
Following the Great War, monsters are banished from the surface, forced to live underground for the rest of their lives. Years later, two sisters stumble upon the realm of monsters and no sign of a way out. The girls must rely on each other, as well as anyone else who's willing to help them… though not everyone is so kind for the right reasons. (VERY T for language/violence/blood).
Undertale - Rated: T - English - Family/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 20,682 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 8/21 - Published: 8/11 - OC, Papyrus, Sans, Asgore D.
Guardians of the Galaxy: Volume 3 reviews
Following the events of Endgame, the Guardians (with Thor and Nebula) seek a way to find and recuse Gamora. As if the mission wasn't impossible enough, along the way they're bombarded by a kamikaze cult leader, repressed trauma in the form of glorified veterinarians, and a green haired moocher who wants to be taken back to Earth. (T for language and rough subject material)
Guardians of the Galaxy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 29,537 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 3/26 - Published: 5/21/2019 - Groot, Nebula, Peter Quill/Star-Lord, Rocket R.
Pokémon Sun and Moon: We Rise and We Fall reviews
Alola is a bright, sunny, welcoming place! But not for everybody. Zayne Mercer has just moved into town, and she's not here to make friends (the absolute fool). But Alola has other plans. As she partakes in the island challenge, she's faced with new opportunities, new challenges... and some of the worst bad guys she's ever seen. There's trouble to be had. (T for language).
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 12 - Words: 73,840 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 12/27/2019 - Published: 6/10/2017 - Lillie, Gladion/Gladio, Hau, Guzma
Not Until the Break of Day reviews
Day, Sans, and Papyrus find themselves in the Unknown- separated. Alone. None know how they got there, or even where it is they are. The three must find each other again and figure out how to return home... if they can. (OC in place of Frisk, follows events of "A New Day" and "Days in the Sun").
Crossover - Over the Garden Wall & Undertale - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 12,019 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 1/5/2019 - Published: 12/20/2018 - The Beast, The Woodsman, Papyrus, Sans
Days in the Sun reviews
After finally being freed from the underground, monsters (as well as humans) adjust to a new life on the surface: both the good times and the bad. (One-shots and short stories of the monster fam in action) (Kinda sorta sequel of "Undertale: A New Day") (T rating because there's probably gonna be some angst thrown in for good measure, so get excited, y'all).
Undertale - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,396 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 11/22/2018 - Published: 7/17/2018 - OC, Papyrus, Sans, Toriel
Undertale: A New Day reviews
Following the Great War, monsters are banished from the surface, forced to live underground for the rest of their lives. Years later, a young girl literally stumbles into their world, and must find a way to return home. Who is a friend and who is a foe? And how far can mercy take her, especially against an enemy who wants nothing less than her demise? (Rated T for action and such)
Undertale - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 30 - Words: 177,267 - Reviews: 84 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 93 - Updated: 3/12/2018 - Published: 11/13/2015 - OC, Papyrus, Sans, Toriel - Complete
When Raccoons Fall From the Sky reviews
So that's the title I'm sticking with, huh? Alright then. I have an OC in this (*and there was much rejoicing*). As far as summaries go: SHIELD and the rage of Rocket Raccoon should not be combined. So naturally, let's do it and see what happens! Snark from both sides is guaranteed. (Rated T for language- we're not going to get saucy and raunchy, here). (STORY ABANDONED SORRY! ):
Marvel - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 34,718 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 12/2/2015 - Published: 1/17/2015