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Joined 05-01-07, id: 1269432, Profile Updated: 02-09-11
Author has written 6 stories for Harry Potter, Charmed, Fantastic 4, House of Wax, Gamer, and Percy Jackson and the Olympians.

Fanfiction's Biggest Trauma: OC v.s. Mary-Sue or Gary-Stu

(Note:Gary Stu is a male Sue, not they're not as popular as our friend Mary but they're still out there)

Most avid readers of fanfiction know exactly what I'm talking about when I say it's the biggest trauma,in stories on Fanfiction.net and basically in all Fanfictions.

Now truthfully I don't mind OC characters, I mean come on look at my stories I write with basically OC's in every one. Now, I understand that some people do not like OC characters. I respect that, I understand; it's cool I totally get where you're coming from. But that doesn't mean you have to flame all OC writers, just because you've read a lot with Mary Sue. I mean, seriously you don't see us flaming you for NOT having Mary Sues. Anyway moving on, as we all know a Mary Sue is:

An original character that's basically 'perfect'.

That's flawless, or lacking of noteworthy flaws.

Who hogs the spotlight.

Who doesn't even in the slightest , possible way, whatsoever ,barely fit into the story, even with the authors plot.

Who nobody, except for the writer and everyone in the Fic, likes.

There's different degrees of horrible, Mary Sue Characters. From basically the writer putting her(him)self into the story, to a drama queen. No matter what the story is basically all Mary-Sue's are the same, BUT not all OC's are the same.

I think all OC writer's need to take the time while writing a fiction, to make sure that their OC has strong points and weak points. The perfect combination of both makes a beautiful story. Now, I'm not saying this to hurt anybody's feelings or flame anybody's stories. This is basically for three reasons: 1. For any beginning, or maybe avid OC fanfiction writers who just happen to stumble across my page. Just to help them out so that there writing skills can improve 2. For my, personal build up on Mary Sue's, it's like a rant in a way. 3. Just so the world can know where I stand on this Mary Sue issue.

For helpful purposes I've scouted out some good websites that can tell you about Mary Sue and give you tips on 'How Not To Write Them'. So just copy, and paste theses and you're all set!

http:///pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MarySue

http:///Avoid-Making-a-Mary-Sue

http:///how_4589029_avoid-mary-sue.html


I am sorry for any of my old readers, I have basically deleted ALL my old stories and only new ones remain. You have to understand that I was going absolutely nowhere with them and I don't think I was every going to go anywhere with them ever again. So I started a new phase of stories and if you hate me I'm sorry, but I really hope you'd give me a chance.


I like to read stories about -Alphabetically-(NOT DONE)

Charmed

CSI:Las Vegas

CSI: Miami

CSI: New York

Gamer

Harry Potter

House of Wax

Supernatural

X-men

Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If yyourpart of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list. AnimeKittyCafe, Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Yavie Aelinel, IwuvMyKenshyPoo, Heidiplease, iNsOmNiAc BiLlIe JoE lOvEr, Black Panther Warrior,Mina the Mischevious, SnowNeko, KylaMizuki, SkyeEyesSparkle7135,Xxx Hana Yori Dango xxX, emosk8tergurl,TheAmericanBaka,Bigcitygoil

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- If you could read that, put it in your profile -

Oh by the way 92 of teens moved on to rap music. If you're part of the 8 that rock out everyday, put this in your profile.

-If you think those stupid kids should just give the rabbit the freakin' Trix, copy this into your profile.

-Milk tastes good. People call me crazy, but I'm just random! If you're random and proud of it, copy and paste this in your profile!

-If you ever forgotten what you were talking about in a conversation copy and paste this into your profile.

-If you have ever fallen up the stairs copy this into your profile

-If you're one of those people who get excited when you see just two reviews, paste this into your profile.

-If you've been on the computer for hours on end, reading numerous fanfictions, copy this into your profile

-If you've ever known you were in mortal danger but decided to go through with the stunt anyway, copy this into your profile

-If you are a complete and utter thrill seeker who thrives off roller-coasters and being dropped from insane heights to have a major adrenaline rush, copy this into your profile.

-If you've ever gone so fast on a boat while on a blow up sea-doo that the sea-doo has burst beneath you and you ended up doing multiple cartwheels on the waters surface that could have easily resulted in a broken limb and then laughed it off as you nearly drowned, copy this into your profile.

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Burn by homicidalslayer reviews
This began as a response to an "Ezra/Aria Car Sex" prompt on the PLL Kink Meme. Has since run totally wild. Ezra POV. A total PWP: 80% Smut, 15% Angst, 5% Fluff, 100% Baby-Free. Review. DO NOT C2 THIS WITHOUT ASKING.
Pretty Little Liars - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 10,042 - Reviews: 141 - Favs: 149 - Follows: 77 - Updated: 4/19/2011 - Published: 2/5/2011 - Aria M., Ezra F. - Complete
Rockin' the Paradise by Laelyn24 reviews
A collection of one-shots that continue the story of Claire 'Tug' Connolly; Skittery is the featured newsy. Sequel to 'Beneath It All.'
Newsies - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 15 - Words: 34,988 - Reviews: 105 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 9/7/2010 - Published: 12/21/2008 - Skittery - Complete
It Sounded Much Cooler In The Movie by OneWordStory reviews
The finale of the Cooler Trilogy.ToadOC:What happened to Liz and Mort one they finally came together again.Awkward dates,sharp witted comebacks,insults,poor attempts at flirting,and maybe some of that old spark.But how will it all turn out by story's end?
X-Men: The Movie - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 10,518 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 2/27/2010 - Published: 11/15/2008 - Toad
That Sounded Much Cooler in My Head by OneWordStory reviews
Elizabeth Brooks’ favorite color is green,he is green,surely they’re meant to be.Too bad he’s an insecure,unstable madman of a mutant who wants to end humanity and she’s a human with an attitude
X-Men: The Movie - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 18,150 - Reviews: 83 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 2/27/2010 - Published: 6/11/2007 - Toad - Complete
The Pier by Orange Socks and Polka Dots reviews
When Bryan Denton's niece who had been suffering from chronic lung diseases moved to New York with him for her health she never expected to fall for a newsie, who could change her whole perspective on life.
Newsies - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 5,996 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 4/19/2009 - Published: 8/12/2006 - Skittery, Bryan D.
Jizen Keiji by Timekeeper101 reviews
LxOC. She is haunted by her past; he's just bored. Both have secrets. Both have reasons to be left alone... But loneliness is hard to deal with when you don't give someone else a chance. Rated M to be safe. Kind of OOC-ish. REWRITE PENDING!
Death Note - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 100 - Words: 404,165 - Reviews: 890 - Favs: 299 - Follows: 99 - Updated: 4/13/2009 - Published: 7/30/2008 - L - Complete
Fate of The Grand Design by Eszra reviews
The StarwHat Crew is sent in to an adventure for there futures. Eight others will join them. One may kill them all, even the one they love.StrawHat CrewXOC
One Piece - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 13,095 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/25/2008 - Published: 1/7/2008 - Luffy
Passion Plays A Game Of Tag by Rose Kitsuna reviews
Completed! Nyoko is just an average girl with a crush on the most sought out boy in school. Yet somehow having him noticing her finally isn't as grand as she hoped. KuraOC
Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 23,719 - Reviews: 133 - Favs: 105 - Follows: 55 - Updated: 5/8/2008 - Published: 11/3/2006 - Kurama M., Youko - Complete
Melody of the Junkyard by Marinus-pseudothyrum reviews
In the Junkyard, set before the ball things are getting heated as Tugger wanders off with another female and a certain ginger tom enters the junkyard.........
Cats - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,456 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 3/9/2008 - Published: 2/18/2007
Riku's Rain by samuraistar reviews
Full summary inside. SoKai, RoxNam, RikOC. Riku falls in love for the first time ever with Ame, a newcomer to the Islands with amazing power and a blushing problem. But will he care enough 4 her to fight when an evil descends on them in later chapters?
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 36 - Words: 98,936 - Reviews: 324 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 2/20/2008 - Published: 6/26/2007 - Riku - Complete
The New Students by Sailorjj07 reviews
CLAMP School Detectives Three new students have arrived at CLAMP school. Who are they? What do they want? Why are they there?
Clamp - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 23,931 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 1/31/2008 - Published: 3/9/2004 - Complete
Understanding Elizabeth by Burstie reviews
Elizabeth James, Remus Lupin's seventeen year old niece, is forced to spend the summer before her seventh year at Grimmauld Place with the one person who aggravates her the most, Fred Weasley, who wants nothing more than to make her his girlfriend.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,981 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 8/29/2007 - Published: 8/28/2007 - Fred W., OC
Life of Rogue by AAJ Edward reviews
When Tas helps a kid escape the cops, she's pulled along with him and his pack. She doesn't expect much to come of it but what she doesn't know is about to bite her and hard. possible ToboeXOC I suck at summaries
Wolf's Rain - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,923 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 8/6/2007 - Published: 6/3/2007
Prognostication for Failures by marapozsa reviews
Razalude doesn't know what he wants anymore.
MeruPuri - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 563 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/21/2007 - Razalude - Complete
Hold Me Down by Everything And Nothing reviews
As you hate me. As you break me. You always seem to hold me down. Warnings: Uchihacest, character death, selfharm, and suggestive themes. Rated M to be safe.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 332 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/13/2007 - Itachi U., Sasuke U. - Complete
A Ring of Surprise by Amy Winters reviews
Another ring has been found by Krystal Quemore, a rather small Elf. Fate brings a new Felloship together, but will Frodo and the others survive the journey? Last chapter is up!
Lord of the Rings - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 15,897 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/6/2002 - Published: 12/24/2001 - Peregrin T.
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Second Life reviews
Kelsey Bertram. Next door neighbor, daughter, sister, and an all around joy to be around. Follow the story of Kelsey as she goes through the hardships of coming to who you are and finding yourself. SimonxOC
Gamer - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,037 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 8/12/2012 - Published: 2/3/2011 - Simon S.
The Mary Sue Chronicles: The Harry Potter Series reviews
Ever just got so annoyed with Mary Sues your head wanted to explode, well here are a collection of one-shots of mockeries of Mary Sue characters, these are only meant for laughs and stress relief against regular Mary Sues. This is the first of many. R&R
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,762 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 7/23/2011 - Published: 3/25/2009
Let The Music Play reviews
Follow the story of Elaine Williams and her look-obsessed best friend Alyssa. Through life comes strife, through strife comes love, through loves comes music.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,618 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/23/2011 - Luke C.
Talking About My Girl reviews
Three girls, four boys, and a town of wax. Carly aspiring to be working at instyle magazine but held back by her boyfriend Wade. Paige with a surprise on a stick for her boyfriend Blake. Then an interesting story about Dalton and his girl or so he thinks
House of Wax - Rated: M - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,091 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 17 - Published: 2/2/2011
Call It Superhuman reviews
Two sets of siblings, three scientists, one kinda scientist, two NON-scientists, and six different kinds of superhuman equals something pretty spectacular or should I say fantastic? JohnnyxOC And movie couples.
Fantastic 4 - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,424 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 6/2/2010 - Published: 2/22/2010
Let It Snow! reviews
“I know it’s confusing, it’s confusing to all of us. We’re all used to fighting demons, not befriending them. But maybe we’ve just been running in to all the wrong demons...." ChrisxOC One Shot
Charmed - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,779 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 6 - Published: 11/6/2009 - Elise R. - Complete
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