Chapter 1

Lol guys it sure has been a while since I last wrote for this story, actually I'll be revising the whole story since I'm dissatisfied with it. I've been reading the last few reviews and couldn't help but to agree, so I am totally going to start putting my own things inside instead of following through with the movies, anime, manga, I have too if I want more reviews.

I'm also going to give it a new name, the story won't be Harry's new name but he will have one.

With that I hope you guys enjoy the new and improved strory

Summary: Shouhei's life couldn't be more perfect, his father was leader of his village so he was known around, his friends always loved playing with him, he was going to be a Genin real soon under a man who he viewed as an uncle. So who's this strange man talking about magic, wands, brooms, a school of wizards, and some man named Moldywort?

Disclaimer: I own nothing people

Oh how far he had fallen, he had never once thought that he would end up here…it just sort of happened. He found himself on the wrong side of a wand but he was lucky enough to be brought before HIM as a toy rather than being killed then and there. He couldn't say his life was terrible, no in fact it was better than he imagined it would ever get. He had friends, parents who loved him despite his short comings, and he was an Animagus something not many wizards more powerful than him could claim and there were a lot of wizards.

His school life wasn't the best academically; he was a below average student making less than mediocre grades. He watched as his Professors disappointment of him when he tried even the most simplest spells and failed.

But that was Academics

Socially he could say that he was the most poplular, he gained the friendship of the most famous, maybe infamous in a certain light, people of the entire school. They had formed a gang for themselves and were revered by all, they taunted, teased, and bullied but they were friends and that was all that mattered.

He had heard what others had said about him, how he was always looking ahead at his friends instead of beside. He didn't care though because they were wrong, they never knew when someone (A slytherin definitely) would attack them from behind so he stayed behind and protected them.

They had protected and looked after each other for years, and then one of them met someone special

And it all started to fall apart

It wasn't just them anymore, it was always her, trying to help him get a date with her, help him see her more, help him woo her. Their friendship was centered around her.

That made the man hate her for she had dug her nails into their group and made it five instead of four, something he wished would never happen.

After that they all started to drift pursuing their own interests though only the man stayed true to all of them and never looked at anyone. He wasn't forgotten, just ignored

It angered him but he promised when he was young that he would never do anything to jeopardize their friendship. So he found it a strange occurrence when the first thing he shouted out when he was released from the petrify curse was something that would kill his friendship with them for good.

"I know where the Potter's are hiding!" He shouted shaking in fear

The Dark lord narrowed his snake like eyes at the fat excuse for a wizard that was withering on the marble floor of his Ancestral home. For the lie he had just heard he was about to end his fun with the toy but a small part was telling him to listen to the man.

"What is your name?" He asked calmly, it was only him, the man, and a few of his most trusted followers in the room, everyone was ensuring that this war was won on the battlefield.

The man started shaking and held his head in his hands, "P-P-Peter Pettigrew,"

With the way he was stuttering, you'd think the Dark lord had already hit him with a Cruciatus

Lucius, one trusted follower and top contributor to the cause, leaned up and whispered to him, "My lord, I do believe it would be wise to keep Mr. Pettigrew alive."

He stared down at his follower with his narrowed eyes, "Are you calling me unwise Lucius,"

The man shook his head, "Never, My Lord, it's that Peter Pettigrew was none during school for how close he clung to James Potter. Though he was the weakest of them I have no doubt he knows much about them."

The Dark Lord's narrowed eyed look turned into glare, "Do you think me so inept Lucius that I can't find the Potter's without the help of someone as lowly as this?"

Lucius knew that he had better chose his next words carefully; you don't cross the Dark Lord when you're alone and you never cross the Dark Lord in public unless you want to be on the wrong end of a cruciatus or even worse, "I simply meant that the search would go faster with the help of their friend, you might even use him as a bargaining chip to get them to come peacefully."

Severus had asked him to plea with the Dark Lord to spare the Potter's lives, Lily Potter being who he really wanted to spare. Lucius was only helping the man for the reason that he was his child's godfather, not his choice more like his wives.

Severus had asked the same of the Dark Lord, the only reason he had even considered the idea was because Severus was the best spy that he had ever had. Even he knew that it would be better to have the man as an ally rather than an enemy. The Dark lord looked towards the man sniveling on the floor with a disdainful look in his eyes, "What did you say your name was again?"

"Peter Pettigrew…my lord,"

He sounded a lot more confident than before

There's a feeling that people get when they're sure that something bad is about to happen. Not many people can feel it but a select few have the ability, though they never know what's going to happen or when. Lily however, could feel it growing closer until it was on the forefront of her mind, she didn't want to worry James over it because she's had this feeling before but it turned out to be nothing. They were already in hiding, no need to keep them more paranoid then they already were, the only thing really keeping the couple sane was the fact they got to stay with their child.

Their wonderful child, Harry, though they would never admit it, Harry was the reason they were in hiding in the first place. A prophecy had been foretold saying that one of two children would be born with the power to defeat Voldemort, Harry was one of those children. Though they were forced into hiding they would never regret having such a wonderful child such as Harry.

The three of them were all they had together, James was the last member of his family, and Lily's family was killed just days before Harry was born. Her adoptive family was all she had but only her adoptive sister seemed to dislike her, she always spouted about being normal and she's hated Lily ever since she discovered her magic.

How she missed her real sister, Kushina Uzumaki, ever since her death Lily (or Ayame being her real name, she still went by Lily because it was the name she grew up with) hadn't been the same.

She had learned about Kushina and the Uzumaki line a few days after she got back from her honeymoon with James. They had been requested at Gringotts for something seriously important, when they had arrived their personal Goblin, Griphook, had told them about they needed Lily's permission for a name change. When she looked she saw a name entirely different from hers, Ayame Uzumaki, when she questioned the Goblin he had said that had been her name ever since she was born.

She had requested to know more about this and Griphook brought out a family tree, it didn't have her adopted family but a different one entirely. A lot of the names read deceased except for a name that was directly next to hers, Kushina Uzumaki nee Namikaze.

Griphook had said this was her sister

They had immediately wanted to meet this sister

Griphook had told them that they'd find her in the elemental nations, someplace they had never even heard of before. The goblins still had some connections there so all it took was some few thousand galleons to get them there. The land was different and vast so it wasn't anywhere near the muggle world's cities, the air was clean and the people seemed to live even farther in the past than the wizarding world.

It was a struggle trying to meet with her sister because her husband was a very powerful leader but they were eventually granted a meeting. She caught up with her heritage and learned of her parents death as well, how she would have been raised if she wouldn't have been lost. The Shinobi world, Hokage, Bijuu, and most important Jinchuriki. She had to learn about those since her sister was one of the most important ones, she had learned the story of Juubi and how its body and last storage of chakra was trapped in the moon.

The day she was supposed to leave and go into hiding, she was given an Uzumaki family scrool, every Uzumaki had put a sealing Jutsu inside and now it was her turn to carry on the legacy. Since all the Uzumaki's were spread around the world so it was up to her to find the next Uzumaki to pass the scroll onto.

Of course she would no doubt pass it onto her son when he grew of age

She was brought out of her musings when the feeling grew like a crescendo of an opera before grinding to a sudden halt until she could feel nothing.

A sound from downstairs, a shout, "Lily!" Her husband was being tortured

If there was one thing Lily excelled at, it was charms and wards. Putting more wards than one could count on the nursery door was tough but doable. She had never expected that Voldemort would find them in their home but that didn't mean she didn't prepare for it. She was lucky that the Dark Lord's massive ego made him take him time in torturing James or else her time would be cut short.

Oh how she wanted to march down there and help him but their child would be left defenseless and that was something that she would gladly give her life to make sure didn't happen. She had kept it a secret from James for a while but she had done research of her own on sealing Jutsu and as her professors had always said she was a very fast learner and took it even farther from there.

Applying her own skills with Alchemy to the sealing and summoning Jutsu of her family…well she just hooped this would work. She made sure the blinds were open and was lucky enough to have a full moon, a night when Jutsu and Magic is at their highest peak. The concealing charm placed on the floor disappeared with the light, the seal itself had intricate lines coming off of it but the middle, where Harry and baby Lily stood, was empty.

She concentrated all the magic she had and clapped her hands together and slammed them down on the floor activating the seal. Flashes of blue and yellow energy swirled around the room, she could practically taste the magic in the air. A red door the size of the window appeared in front of it before opening to darkness.

She couldn't move from her spot or the seal would be destroyed and incomplete, she could only watch and hope. The screaming stopped and yet she somehow knew that her husband was dead, she could tell that Voldemort had heard the commotion coming from the room by how fast her wards were being broken down.

She watched as a glowing white wolf, almost like a spirit animal, flew out of the door and above her son. This creature was the Juubi, she hoped, well half of it to be accurate, no child could take on the last remaining source of the Juubi's power, nor could the Sage of Six paths allow it roam so he had it sealed.

The seal on the floor wasn't just an Uzumaki seal, she had add some of her own components to the circle that altered the Juubi somewhat. She had taken the good side out of the Juubi's body and was going to put it into her son for the Jinchuriki of the Juubi itself should be able to survive numerous killing curses before dying. Most Jinchuriki can, although others…

She just hoped her son wasn't a part of the others

"What have we here?" A malicious voice appeared at the doorway and before Lily could turn around a green light flashed before her eyes

'I didn't get to finish…' That was the mother's last thought before all life drained from her body

Voldemort stepped over her body not wanting to get muggleborn on his shoes, "I had promised Severus that I would spare you after I killed your family, but this last ditch effort at survival…" He stared at the white wolf that was swirling around the crib, "Cannot go unpunished," He held out his wand and the wolf ground to halt looking directly at him with eyes he had never seen before, he pulled out his wand and pointed it directly at the child.

They stared at each other before staring down at the child looking at Voldemort through the bars before looking back up, "Avada-," The wolf dived down, "-Kedavra!"

A green light changed to white in the house at the end of Godric's Hollow, then an explosion that disrupted everyone's Halloween was heard from miles all around. Though no one knew where the explosion came from (For the house was under Fidelius Charm and no one could see it) they thought that it was just mere fireworks being set off for part of the Halloween spirit.

If they had happened to see the house, they would for sure inspect but would only find two dead bodies instead of four.

"Hokage-sama," Sarutobi turned from looking out the window at the village he was supposed to be leading, to the man who was already a high ranked member of ANBU and had just joined a few months ago. The man had white hair that stuck up at odd angles, half of his face was concealed, and his eyes were too different colors, one was gray and the other was the eye that belonged to a powerful clan within the village.

"How my I help you, Kakashi?" Sarutobi looked down in his arms to see a baby, at least a year old, in Kakashi's arms. He wondered when had the man had fathered a child but realized that either the child took a lot after his mother or this wasn't Kakashi's child at all.

He laid the child down on a pillow atop the desk and stood firm, "I was just recently coming back from a mission when I found this child in the forest."

Sarutobi gave him a calculating look, "Why bring him here?"

He held out his hand over the child's stomach, and fueled it with chakra, "Because of this Hokage-sama," A seal appeared on the child stomach, one so intricate it outshone another child's seal by leagues.

Sarutobi's eyes widened as he traced the seal with his finger making the sleeping child stir a little, "You don't have reason to believe that this child is a Jinchuriki, do you Kakashi?" He asked worriedly

Kakashi shook his head, "I don't believe so Hokage-sama, all the Jinchuriki are accounted for, even the new one."

The Hokage looked at him from underneath his hat, "And his parents were no were to be seen?"

"There was no camp site, no signs that anyone had even stepped close around area, no signs of chakra, with the way I sensed things the child had just suddenly appeared." Kakashi explained, he had checked for miles around but the only fresh tracks he found was that of animals.

"Children do not just suddenly appear Kakashi," Sarutobi glanced up at him before sighing, "We're still recovering from the Kyuubi incident, there are so many homes that still need rebuilding, wounds are still fresh, both mental and physical, people still angry at the demon for their family. If this child was the Jinchuriki of a minor demon, and the village found out, they would no doubt want him sent out of the village or worse."

"There's also the fact that the other villages would be upset over the leaf village having another Jinchuriki in their village, tensions would be raised, attack accusations would be raised, things are already tense between the other villages as is, this might just be that straw."

"Then we'll try to make sure no one learns of his origins,"

Kakashi tilted his head, "What will you do?"

Sarutobi smiled for the first time since the child was brought into his office, "I'll adopt him,"

Kakashi's good eye widened, "You can't be serious Hokage-sama?" He asked in disbelief, "If the village found out-,"

"They wouldn't be able to anything because he is my son, they wouldn't raise a hand against him for me being his father." He then grew a solemn look, "I wish I could do the same with Naruto but there are many circumstances preventing me, at least I won't fail with this child." He then chuckled at Kakashi, "And just because I'm old doesn't mean I have forgotten about raising a child, I'm still helping Asuma out of tight spots."

Kakashi knew that no matter what argument he could come up with, the Hokage wanted to correct his mistake of not helping a child in need with the best of his ability. He was going to adopt this child and make sure he got a loving father just as he was going to be the same with Naruto.

Who knows maybe both boys could grow up to be friends?

"As you wish Hokage-sama," Kakashi bowed respectfully before coming back up, "If that is the case, then what will you name him?"

Sarutobi looked down at the child who was to be his new soon with the same look he had decades ago when his first child was being born, "Shohei, Sarutobi Shouhei,"

So as you can see I revised it a lot, I'm only keeping the other story up to have reference, I do believe that this revision is a lot better than before. I request that if you're just viewing the story don't read the other one, it would spoil all the surprise.

To some of you who are like "Lily could not have done all that in that short span of time you're so fucking stupid!" Well you have to think, when you write things happen slower than they should, so if you were watching this all of it would have taken about at least three minutes.

I changed his name guys, I just thought I'd choose something more manly

Pairings are the same but might change with how my mind works

If I missed anything tell me and I'll do something about it

Tell me what you guys think, do you think I did better or do you think I should have kept the other story.