Okay, this was fantastic. These two episodes where Joss dies and John goes crazy for revenge always breaks my heart. I can't take it and yet I somehow manage to bring myself to read these LOl.
It was a fantastic story. You captured both harold's and Shaw's personality well. I enjoyed it immsenly . Well done.

This was brilliant! I love these episodes as well, and I think you did a fantastic job capturing Shaw's character, awarding us a good look inside her inner workings.

I really like the way you explored Shaw's inner struggle with understanding her emotions or seeming lack of. This is well written and a clear window into her evolution as a team player. I like the character but resent the writer's emphasis on her as a replacement for the Reese character.

Ah, well done... My opinions of Shaw were undeniably the same at first. I had a big fear that what I loved between Reese and Finch would be threatened. Really enjoyed this piece and its depth.

Yes, sure thing - no doubt that you will see me there!
Thanks for writing POI!

Yes!
Touched me deeply.
Thanks
Papaya

I love this persepctive on events - very nicely written too! :)

Loved hearing Shaw's thoughts on the events regarding "The Devils' Share." She's not an easy character to understand or like, in my opinion, but I thought you did a good job of portraying her in a sympathetic and accurate light. Thank you for sharing.

I agree. although technical skill is great that missing element of emotion and feeling and intuition is something vital and important too... esp in shaw's case

This was great! Can't wait to read your next one you have stored up :)

Thank you for sharing this nice fill-in scene!
I've resented Shaw since she was first introduced in a full episode of her own and took time away from my favorite duo! But over the last couple of months she has begun to grow on me; perhaps because she's as damaged as the other members of Team Machine, and because she does try help both Reese and Harold.
Besides, Bear likes her, so there must be something there of value! :)
Hope you will post more POI fics.

This was really a great insight into Shaw's character. I'm also one of the people who are slowly - very slowly - warming up to her.

Thanks for sharing!

PS: I'm looking forward to that story you mentioned!

For someone who doesn't like Shaw, you did a nice job getting in her head. Nice read!

This is excellent! I've also really resented the way that Shaw has intruded on the Reese/Finch dynamic this season - although I may be warming up to her as well.

Your characterization of Shaw feels spot-on, and it was intriguing to picture this scene from her POV.

Well done, and I look forward to your next story.

This was very interesting to read. sometimes writing about the charachters from a third person view point is really effective. This was well done and I loved all you insights, like how Reese wasn't even trying to fight his demise but rather embracing it. I really think Reese was ready to die, and to be honest am not sure if he will be initially happy at being saved. But who knows , we will see. I can't wait to read your other story. please post it as soon as you can.