Haha :) This is fabulous! Keep it up!

Ah, I love this. I can definitely see Sirius doing something like this :3 I love the ending, and your spag is flawless, as usual. They were both in character - which is great, and makes this fic all the better. And the romance was super adorable, too, especially the little touches like the hand on the back. Great job!

XD This was beyond perfect, although I didn't realise butterbeer was quite so...alcoholic. o.o Considering the students can have it and all. Maybe they get a different version? XD I love the little touches, like how badly Sirius cooks-and especially how, even when he's not the one cooking, he STILL manages to burn Remus's flat down! "Oops" is right. :p And the fact that they realise their feelings -before- the fire is a nice touch, too, I think [as well as Sirius not understanding what the fire department is...perfect!] Very well done.

Hey Ash!

To be honest I’m not a big fan of slash or even pre-slash not to mention that I kind of love Tonks with Remus, but I have to admit, that even I liked this one-shot.
It was humorous and kind of fluffy at the same time with a bit of angsty touch as neither of them had anyone else, but each other. The end was pretty cute even if I was kind of sad of the fire which probably destroyed everything Remus had.
I could go on about how great writer you are, but I’m pretty sure everyone knows that. You are talented to put it simply.
Keep up the good work! :)

Alicia :)

Aww. Sirius and Remus are so sweet together here. I can absolutely picture Sirius doing something like accidentally burning Remus's flat, and then inviting Remus to live with him. You did a great job characterizing both of them, as well; I would say both of them were in-character, and the romance was well-written without being too forced. A couple small things - first, I think it's just a bit unrealistic for Sirius and Remus to go nearly two years without seeing one another. They were both in the Order, after all, and in addition they were so close at school. Plus, I doubt that Sirius moved back into Grimmauld Place after Hogwarts, even if both his parents had died; the place obviously held so many bad memories for him, as shown in OotP, that I think it would be more realistic if Sirius got a flat of his own. Apart from those little things, though, this was an enjoyable read; the dialogue between Remus and Sirius was wonderful, and SPaG/sentence structure was good - no mistakes that I saw.

Heheh I love how Sirius loves Christmas so much, my beautiful baby. I just love the mental image of him being happy and hanging decorations and whistling and asdfghjio

His thoughts on Remus are hilarious, like the emphasis on how he could stare into Remus's eyes and thats its just the two of them alone together and the kneee touching and asdfghjko. He's adorable. Delightfully cracky hahah

ahhhh my favourite line would have to be 'like what you see?' and then that kiss omg they're so cute. my feels hahah

I remember you talking about this fic on viber I'm so glad you wrote it because that ending is fabulos. I love this, great job!

Honestly, I am not a fan of Wolfstar. That being said, I thought this was very well written, both Remus and Sirius were characterized well (besides the whole "gay" thing), and it was a very clever story. The use of prompts, I mean.
Good job :)

I couldn't stop myself from laughing after reading such a fic, it was also very cute at the end... with Remus and Sirius now living together. I can already imagine all the consequences that would happen after such a development. ;)

Okay, this gets to be the first Wolfstar fic I have read. I really liked it. The way you described Christmas and general December for Sirius is something so similar to mine that it made me smile silly.
"God Rest Ye Merry Hippogriff" made me giggle.
Couldn't they have used Aguamenti on the fire?
All in all, I loved the story. :)

Awwhh! To begin, this was hilarious in all the right ways and adorable and fluffy where it should be. I absolutely loved that they didn't spend hours in each other's arms (talk about being unrealistic -_-) but took it slowly, and the way you showed Sirius' uncertainties regarding his feelings for Remus was perfect. I LOVEDD the descriptions of the food though I'm a vegetarian, even the turkey sounded and smelt good in my head - you sure have a way with words :D I really wish the two had just had their moment before the place caught fire, but oh well. Overall, this was very well done, and no errors whatsoever :) Keep writinggg :D

This was so cute! I love WolfStar. Ah, so annoying that their gorgeous first kiss was interrupted by a fire! How inconvenient. My only criticism was that it was a little slow to being with but I guess it would have been weird to get straight into it. I think the humour and touch of crack was very well done too.

Haha!Such a cute ending!I adooored it!And Sirius is just too funny!

This was actually pretty so-so for me. Sirius and Remus' relationship seemed too forced and formal, when I've always thought them to always be quite easy together, even after time apart. Like when Sirius went to Azkaban. Anyway, thanks for writing.

Oh Sirius... Love the fic.