Loved it

Good to stumble across your profile and see you're still writing! :D I've gotten back into the fanfic game last year and am more or less transitioning to posting on AO3 (Archive of Our Own), myself.

Really liked this one of yours! Perfectly in that NGE "mood" while giving us some AsuShin cuteness to enjoy. Excellent work as always! Hope you'll be back on EGF someday (I've taken a short break until FINAL (whenever that happens, heh), myself).

Do take care, my friend :)

Damn... I must say that was very good. Not just smut but an erotic short that actually focused on the thoughts and motivations of the characters. Hell, that was so well written that I'd love to read a sequel to this 1shot or just simply have a chapter 2. But where would be a good starting point in the tv series canon I wonder? Hmm... I suppose there would be several actually with 9 more angels to go before the series ends.

Yeah.

I had to turn on "Won't You Stay" for this one. It's one of the best love songs ever made, and it features guitarist Norman Brown. I could have turned on some Sade and it would have been the best backdrop ever.

What does this mean? It means this was so engrossing that I *had* to put music to it. It simply did not read properly without it. I had to stop at the end of the first scene and write this review, to break the immersion just to type words that are not doing this piece of artistry justice.

Where do I begin? How do I end this review with anything that shows enough appreciation for showing this paring as it could have been, had things not gone to Hell?

I can't... there are no words. I have to finish this before the anticipation kills me. Pardon.

Great story: nice and HOT, but also realistic. I especially loved the shaky disentangling, matter of fact washing up, and some nice introspection and character stuff in the end. Shinji and Asuka were very in character the whole time, of course: the latter even reminds me a bit of myself, haha XD I'll try to get around to reading your other stories: I bet they'll be great even without the sexy smut :P

This was very good. Well done. :)

Great job any chance of a similar Shinji Mistao story? would love to read it thanks for putting this up was well worth the read

I'd love to see a sequel of this one day, where they end up going all they way with each other. I've always shipped Shinji and Asuka from day one, and this is one of the best lemons of them I've read, mainly because you've captured their characters quite well!

was this a one-shot would love to see a part two or something similar good work either way

While I am not a big fan of Asuka given her personality usually, I have to admit in this instance it seems that she and Shinji managed to get along and extended a little bit of trust between one another. I think there's a lovely touch of little curiosity mingled with with hesitation and fear, but coming out without going too far and yet leaving a small smile to a reader's face.

Thank you for creating this.

Another classic. This was phenomenally well written and realistic, and actually much better than even your previous works. Well done, sir! Favorited.

Very very cool! Sounds like a normal night with two fourteen year old lock in a room alone and having Asuka take charge. Hope to see more lemons scenes (yes I'm a baka henita) and this story looks like it has a great tone. Keep up the great work!

Aww this was super cute.

Interesting story are you planing on making any more eva smut in the future

8/10

Nice erotic one-shit story.