wondering how the original chapter wrote~

I'm so glad you were able to put up another chapter. Thank you.
I really feel for Tarn in this chapter, like instead of a killer robot he was just a person trying to provide for his family.
Super interesting as always. I hope to see another chapter soon :)

So glad to see an update on this story! It sounds like many schemes are afoot with Prowl and Soundwave, but Jazz's involvement is sure to keep everything interesting. Poor Tarn, caught in the middle of it all...

Yay! An update! Very interesting story. Curious about this story's version of Prowl. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Is this story complete or not? I hope it isn't because I would love to read more of it. There are so many things that I need to find out what happens next. You've got a writing style that makes it very hard for me to stop reading. I feel so much for the characters and love how you've written all of them.

Keep up the great work :)

I love the personality you have given Tarn. His dedication to his team is very admirable. I like stories about what life would be like for bots once the war was over and this is so far one of my favourites. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Very well written. Great job :)

I love how well you write all the realities of war/post war! I've always felt so much sympathy for the Deception Cause becaudr let's face it... Cybertron is/was awful if you're not rich. The way your write Jazz is so good as well, I love seeing him a little bit twisted. Can't wait to read more! Here's hoping Tarn settles into his new job...

Initially when you started writing about Pharma, I was wondering about the right old mess Tarn's in but at the end of the chapter... The tension and anticipation rose ten-fold!
Can't wait to see what'll happen at Off Track!

Something tells me that Pharma is in for quite a surprise. :D

Hurray for updates! And 'Ligier' (i kn0w hoo u r) tries to verbally talk himself out of 'liking' a no-good con-cop (hurrhurr)!

Oh, I had no problem figuring out who "Ligier" is. Even if I hadn't recognized the name right off, the description and the way he talked was a dead giveaway, along with Jazz's comments about him. :D

Tarn really seems to be learning as he's going. I'd best compare it to navigating through a minefield.

Haha, what a great twist!
I'm glad that Tarn doesn't have to be degraded that much! And it's nice to see him say 'thank you' finally :)
It's really cool how you described the social situation there (both in this chapter and the previous two). And the way that the Justice Division wants to make sure the Cause and the war weren't all for nothing is actually very... nice... for them. Finger's crossed they manage! :D
Oh, and your stick idea is really awesome! It fits the nightclub-host scene perfectly, and is also an ingenious way to measure time!

Poor Tarn! That has to be one of the most awkward interviews ever!

Haha, such lovely conversations! And the way that Tarns thoughts give more information about the situation is just great! I don't know if I should be happy he got the job or not, which is probably what he's thinking... Conveniently ending on a cliff hanger :)
The poor guy... He can't just... Chizzle away portions of the mask...?

An interesting concept, and you written it very well!
I love the way you depict his thoughts, and it's so sweet how he cares about his team; while also being very believable. Haha... Good luck Tarn!