| Reviews for Ghost Of Yourself |
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Beyondtoday chapter 5 . 5/15/2019 Ugh, gut wrenching! |
Beyondtoday chapter 3 . 5/15/2019 What do you mean this chapter was unnecessary! Oh my gosh, I can feel Bones fear and pain. It's so real, I can feel my heart pound when his two friends appear. |
Eclectikon chapter 6 . 9/2/2017 Oh my this story is too good to let languish unresolved. I so hope you come back to it. |
ASiriusAuthor chapter 7 . 10/23/2016 Really, really good. Please update. Please. *puppy eyes* |
ThePro-LifeCatholic chapter 7 . 10/21/2016 Welp...wow. This is some pretty well-written angst, if you ask me. So often, when reading something that has a huge amount of h/c (especially on this scale), the author has a tendency to lose the characters in the situation. But you've managed to keep McCoy's characteristics, despite the torture and the agonies that surround him. And Kirk and Spock are wonderfully in-character, as well. It's a nice change from the usual not-quite-right angst attempts I've read over the years. Well done, and I hope to see this completed sometime in the future! |
Lukes's mom chapter 7 . 10/6/2016 Very good story! Would love to see you come back and finish it. Perhaps a crisis aboard the ship would help bring McCoy back. Perhaps Kirk or Spock in medical jeopardy? The ship attacked? Come back! |
Eclectikon chapter 7 . 9/11/2016 I've just discovered your story. Its wonderful. I so hope you find your muse and revisit this. |
Danzinora Switch chapter 7 . 10/8/2015 I am STOKED that you are back, and with yet another excellent chapter! They are so wonderful, and I wait patiently between each one. May the muse be with you. |
mtcbones chapter 7 . 10/8/2015 wow where is this going poor leonard he has to start eating and doctoring |
Hypnagogic Hallucination chapter 7 . 10/8/2015 Thank you for updating. I really like this story, I have a serious weakness for Hurt!Bones stories! |
Kimberleah chapter 7 . 10/7/2015 Wonder how Bones will pull himself together? |
Ersatz Einstein chapter 7 . 10/7/2015 I can't believe this is off hiatus! Hooray! I love the details of your narration, particularly in the opening. On a more serious note, you might want to fix the random tense shifts from past perfect to past to present and back. It takes the reader out of the flow of the story. There were some other errors (like "no" for "not"), but nothing else really pervasive. |
DarkRed101 chapter 7 . 10/7/2015 Thank you for updating! :) |
Lunar0 chapter 6 . 6/10/2015 Emotionally gripping story, can't wait until next update! |
legolover101 chapter 6 . 4/16/2015 Will you ever update again? Your story is awesome! |