Interesting start for. a story, you shouldn't end it here. But you did.

Aww. I think that deep inside the eleventh doctor feels so guilty about this.

Interesting concept! It would be great to read a story about how the doctor and rose's lives changed after this happened.

Really nice concept, and well executed!

But what happened to the collapsing realities?!

Oh my goodness, this was amzing! :D It made me cry a little, but the ending...oh it was so beautiful! 'The Doctor and Rose Tyler in the TARDIS, as it should be.' I wish that part where Ten says that hadn't been cut from "Journey's End", but it fits so perfectly here! Great work!

Very interesting...Not sure what exactly to say...x3 I liked it, but slightly confusing. Hopefully you do something with it!
(And hopefully keep me from completing my bloody chemistry work...)

OohhHhh I loved this! Is there more? There should be more. Screw cannon, write up this 'verse!

it was great i loved it!

I am in awe.

Not Eleven. No. Should've simply had him drop her off with Twelve with a locked memory for him and no warning for Rose.

That gives the angst you apparently want and adds you to those of us that are already adding 12th ficcies. I've got one one up...a few others do too.

Dam those feels
*manly tears*

well that was drastically different hten I though I loved it though great job

This is a very well written story although I wasn't jumping up and down about the ending. I think if you made it so 11 convinced 10 to spend as much time as he could with Rose it would make a good one-shot. :)

awwww! I would love to see this as a series!