so far this fic is promising. among all levi fics i've read up till now, yours is one of the most well written. how you keep them in characters, and the likeable main oc with pretty name. hope you will continue this.

My goodness, this is honestly one of the best Levi fanfics I've ever read in my life. The perfectly slow pace, the characters not acting OOC at all (in my opinion at least) and the amazing OC's are what make this story truly worthwhile. I really, and I mean really, hope that you come back to it. I know it's been a while since the last update but I do hope that one day you decide to continue with it!

WHY DO ALL THE GREAT ONES REMAIN UNFINISHED?
Lucifae hack it already.
I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE LEVI

I am waiting for your next chapter. I bet it was going to be amazing like the previous
Chapters. I really like this story, so pls update soon :))

UPDATE I SWEAR OMG I WILL MAGICALLY BECOME A COMPUTER HACKING GENIUS AND TRACK DOWN YOUR IP ADDRESS AND FORCE YOU TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS FOR THIS, I WILL MAKE IT LIKE THE CHINESE COCAINE INDUSTRY AND COMMAND YOU TO CREATE MORE AMAZINGNESs pls pls pls update or i'll die i swear it on my cat's life (i love this cat more that tacos and that's something)

pleeeeeeeeaaaase please PLEASE get off your hiatus!

I just noticed -.-' ... Ashe League of Legends?

NO THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING FIC WHY IS IT ON HIATUS? WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE OFF HIATUS?

Txxuu

I love this story. There's no doubt about it. Honora is endearing in an awkward-megane way and Levi is wholly just Levi. XD

I enjoy your simple yet in-depth portrayal of characters and emotions too.

I love Sosuke. 3 He's so cool and sweet, and awesome. I like how you portray your characters - with fears and weaknesses, not at all perfect. They're also very likeable, especially Sosuke. Okay, I'm a bit biased.
Levi and Honora would make a great couple! So cute! ;)
Also, I love the name you chose for the mc! Honora Asche. Emm, I think I made a mistake with the spelling but I like they way it sounds!
Haha, hope you update soon!

Please update soon!

Ah, such a great OC story!

I just got into Shingeki no Kyojin like a week ago, not even, but I make sure to visit the fandom for any good stories, and I'm so thankful I clicked on this one.

Characterization so far for Levi and Hanje, the characters we see the most, is great. Levi isn't remotely interested in Honora the first couple of times he meets her, but warms up to her with time. Even now he's becoming aware of her after spending so much time together. I admit I would like to see more development with Erwin, since her main purpose was to create the radar formation, but I'm sure you've created your own pace for this story.

Now onto your cast of OCs... I will admit at first
I had my misgivings about Honora, but I stuck through with it because your writing style appealed to me. I'm so glad for that. She turned into a wonderful OC. She's quiet and mature and not under 20, a rarity in OCs, period. Her workaholic personality is something I personally empathize with and I'm glad I can make the connection. She isn't a Titan slayer but she isn't useless either, the perfect combination.

Speaking of which, your cast of OCs is something I would like to see more development in. I actually want to read more about her interactions with her squad, which is weird because usually I care more about the OCs interactions with the canon characters. I know some will inevitably die, considering that the canon squad will appear soon enough, but I would enjoy to get to know them more, honestly. Especially her relationship with Sosuke and Lang, those two will become her support and I want to see how.

In the end, wonderful story and writing style. Lack of reviews is a problem to some stories but that by no means indicates a lack of interest. You have piqued mine and I will be waiting for that update!

Quite an interesting story

Wow I love this story. Honora and Levi's relationship is so funny. I can't wait to read the next chapter!