Reviews for Together
Munkeyfump20 chapter 5 . 2/9/2017
So sweet thanks for a very good read
Ozzie13 chapter 5 . 3/30/2016
Another of your stories I absolutely adored. Jane seemed almost a little too fragile in this, but I loved how Lisbon healed him. I also love the way you write about the sexy times in this. It's subtle and suggestive and hot, and it doesn't need clear-cut explicitness. Awesome.
LouiseKurylo chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Fine story. Love the weeks of solitude, healing and bonding with the prospect of an unshadowed life ahead. Thanks for writing it.
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Beautiful chapter. Realistic reaction by both to the situation you present (slightly AU, since prior to the actual airing of S6E1).
marta75 chapter 5 . 10/9/2013
your story is amazing. Bravo !
MusicSweetly chapter 5 . 9/27/2013
This was truly a very beautiful chapter. Just lovely. I honestly long to see them in a place like this together. Or at the very least, "Together" :) Well done!
Idan chapter 5 . 9/27/2013
Oh, I want to run away to Norway now! Thanks for this bit of wish fulfillment! I wouldn't call it fluff though—you were really realistic in how you had Jane wrestling with the emotional turmoil that came from the end of his quest. I felt really bad for Lisbon for a while! But the images of them snuggling on the balcony and walking in the snow looking for Dorothy will be with me a long time, I suspect. Thanks for this!
MissDonniex chapter 5 . 9/27/2013
what a wonderful story...I felt I was in the room with the two lovers...thank you for sharing.
CrazerCat chapter 5 . 9/26/2013
I am so glad you have no will power and I must thank the person who asked you to give this story an extended ending because this was simply breathtakingly beautiful. All of it. The location, the emotional turmoil and the immense love. I'm in awe, it was so wonderful. Thank you.
Rosepeony chapter 5 . 9/26/2013
Absolutely bloody brilliant I loved the way that Patrick had to retreat inside himself to let his grief release and I loved the way Lisbon allowed him the time. I loved the slow simplicity of the writing and the way you emphasised the chronology of their learning to be together. Thank you.
Ilovetea chapter 5 . 9/26/2013
Thank you very much for this fantastic epilogue! It was just awesome!
I think you did a very good job by letting Jane be so battered and exhausted. Everything else would be unrealistic.

Now I'm going to pay attention not to miss your next story.
make-mine-a-kiaora chapter 5 . 9/26/2013
Oh that's beautiful!

Thank you for writing this.
Elc41 chapter 5 . 9/26/2013
Well done :)
carla.oliveira.754703 chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
Sorry it ended. It was so good.
BookWorm4479 chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
Cunning ending. Thank you for sharing this.
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