| Reviews for It Just Makes Sense |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2016 Is there a chance that you continue this story? |
 Anjanie chapter 6 . 1/21/2015 auwhww! |
| XZanayu chapter 6 . 9/13/2014 Really like this story! Please continue! |
| Major Abigail Whitlock chapter 6 . 8/12/2014 that was an awesome chapter ive been waiting for an update, please update soon |
| Little Karma chapter 6 . 3/12/2014 i love it so much, why do i do this to myself. I really really hope you update, all the good ones are always abandoned. |
| Biku-sensei-sez-meow chapter 6 . 12/7/2013 YAY! It's starting! Trunks and Goten sneaking off sounds a lot like me and Kat, always doing stuff like that to prove we were better. I really, really, reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreally love this story. You actually use paragraph breaks, it is understandable, and realistic, despite the awesomeness of the non-cannon Piccohan. They are my favorite characters too. Please, keep writing. And I totally agree with you. it's fanfiction, obviously written by... *OMB! FANS! What is this world coming to.* end sarcasm. So really, the disclaimer is kind of pointless. Anywhore, please update as soon as you can. Sayonara! Meow! |
| ShadowSnafus chapter 6 . 10/25/2013 Your depiction on Trunks and Goten was so spot on! Can't wait for chapter 7! |
| 4fireking chapter 1 . 10/20/2013 Good, chapter.., Hi,. My name's, 4fireking. Want to, be friends. We can talk about OC story ideas. Maybe friends isn't the right word to use. Co-workers would be better. How about how come up with the ideas for characters. Or would you rather I come up with the ideas for the character.. |
| ShireWulf chapter 6 . 10/20/2013 Well done! Looking forward to ch7! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/15/2013 Please write more. I like this story a lot. |
| ShireWulf chapter 5 . 9/23/2013 I SOMEHOW FORGOT TO PUT THIS ON MY ALERT SYSTEM. Anyway, highly enjoying so far, I noticed a few grammar-typo thingies but nothing to distract from the story too much. I think your characterizations are pretty much spot on. My biggest critique is that you seem to be telling a bit too much, try to show a little more with description, even if it slows the pace down slightly. But honestly I really like this story. I legitimately hardly ever read Piccohan because they tend to jump in way too quickly, and I really like that this is taking the time to let the demonic duo actually have the chance to develop and realize feelings for each other :) |
| Fee chapter 5 . 9/17/2013 Yeah good, Long and cool. I love it so much. More Fluff please. |
| ShadowSnafus chapter 5 . 9/16/2013 So happy that you've updated! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
| Yay chapter 4 . 9/16/2013 Yay its Beautiful. More more more. |
| Rin chapter 4 . 9/15/2013 I love it so much. Please update. |
