are you ever going to update this story? because it's not marked as complete and it feels like it's not finished , like there could be more added.

I can't help but think due to who gave Raleigh his training , is he possibly part parahuman of the more human like kind? and who are his parents? do they have anything to do with how trained him if he's full human ?

Mako is a were cat or a skin changer?

I love this story please please please update or do a follow up fic

I think it's safe to say you're my favorite author and this is my favorite story EVER

Gahhh I love this fic so much!

Great work!

Hooray for Louhi! She saved both herself and Chuck!

And, at far too long last, our merman allies show up!

With good news, as usual! Hopefully, we'll get an explanation of why they're helping ...

And, looks like Herman is expanding his horizons! Looks like he's going to have to take in a ... guest ..., as well. At least for the Lunar Peak deal ...

Keep up the great work, please!

Thanks for continuing this great story! I just hope that *both* of Striker's pilots made it!

And Pentecost, I hope he makes it, too!

(I was kinda hoping the mysterious underwater allies would show up for Pitfall. Maybe later, then?)

Since Pitfall isn't the end of *this* story, I have to wonder what's next?

Whatever it is, keep up the great work, please!

A new Beginning? For *ALL* the human races, normal and paranormal?

Thank goodness you're back!

Thanks for the list of characters! I would like to know more about the (underwater) folks who showed up to help in Chapter 7. Who are they? Why are they helping the PPDC *now*? And, most importantly, will they help stop the Apocalypse with the PPDC?

Finally, it seems weird that both Raleigh and Yancy *missed* on getting briefed on such an important part of their service. Or, is something up with that?

So this story is AMAZING and everyday I read it over and over again. I really do hope you update soon because this is seriously a cool AU and I don't usually like AUs so that's a rarity and I look forward to seeing more if you continue

Hello! I really hope that you plan on continuing this. It's fascinating, and you're great at writing...I hope you post another chapter soon!

hello... hi.. um.. are you going to finish the story?... it's Really good!... i um like your story.. it's really interesting.. THANK YOU!

Please write more! This is great! I've never read one like this!

:D

Great work, as usual! Although I'm not sure I like the fact that the energy elemental got *forced* into helping ...

And, Chuck *has* gotten away with a LOT of nastiness and generally disrespectful behavior. It's *the Marshal's* responsibility to discipline his people, not one of his doctors.

And, speaking of which, why didn't the witches have a dedicated medical facility? What's going on in there, that has to be kept so secret?

And, there seems to have been a date set in stone for "the Apocalypse", even if you think that Newt may've brought on the attack on Hong Kong (which I don't). What determined that?

All in all, great work, though!

P.S. Ignore the idiot(s) "Guests".