| Reviews for Asylum |
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   Bronz000 chapter 5 . 6/26/2016 my god... please... please continue this. this is a great and really refreshing story. id love to read more. its incredibly interesting and unique. i love it. please continue. |
| ZoeysZone chapter 5 . 5/15/2016 Okay that is not okay. You can't just start writing an amazing story and then leave it at a cliffhanger. I don't care if its been years and you don't even care about the story anymore, you are going to finish the cliffhanger because I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Honestly this story is so cute- and dark- and I just love it. I really wish you could find it in you to continue this story, I really want to see how it all unfold in the end. I will love you for forever. |
| Alice P. Snow chapter 5 . 8/30/2014 Oh, wow. Please continue! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/16/2014 Ohmygod! I love this! Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/12/2014 This... is... awesome! I love it! 3 please continue! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/3/2014 This is a great story! I can't wait for another chapter! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2013 Mira as in Mirajane? |
| Spein chapter 5 . 10/25/2013 Woooow! That was awesome! |
| JuneGilbertVivianRaeven chapter 5 . 9/29/2013 Yes, yes it is a cliffhanger. And a dang frustrating one at that. Is Damion okay? Aggghhh... SUSPENSE... PLEASE UPDATE! And with a check-up on Spirit, please... I'm starting to get scared about him... Is he okay? Did Stein... Oh gawd, please don't kill any characters... :( Knees knocking to discover Spirit and Damion's fate. Please update soon! |
| littleliebling chapter 4 . 8/22/2013 excellent dialogue ! you did a really good job with everybody :) cant wait for next chapter ... WTF is with Stein? Yeah, awesome update and thanks a bunch! |
| JuneGilbertVivianRaeven chapter 4 . 8/20/2013 Ow. Poor Spirit. Mixed up in a mess indeed... Stein is now confusing dreams with reality. Uh-oh... My Critiques: When "xxx" pops up, use it this way (example sentence) "No, don't, please," Stacy moaned. (Comma next to end of sentence) Otherwise, I love it :) Please keep writing! |
| WALRUSvsUSA chapter 4 . 8/20/2013 he set of a crazy person is what he did. T.T |
| littleliebling chapter 3 . 8/19/2013 Aww no Stein today :( But still an excellent chapter, Im just a massive Stein fangirl :) Just so you know, some dialogue is a bit rushed... Try putting a bit more personality particular to that character into it! But on the other hand your story construction and style is brilliant Thanks a lot for this and UPDATE SOON! - roboferret o_O |
| littleliebling chapter 2 . 8/17/2013 Please continue! I love this pairing and there aren't enough Fics for it, but this looks really good, so keep at it! |
| JuneGilbertVivianRaeven chapter 2 . 8/15/2013 I think some names were missing this chapter... There were confusing blank spots. Otherwise, I really like this :) |
