That was sweet and cute, I'll give you that!

You're not consistent with Naruto's pronouns. Half the time Naruto is referred to as 'she' the other half 'he'. If Naruto is a-gender or non-binary most prefer they/them for pronouns. It would be cool if he was. There aren't to many authors out there who write him like that. Anyways, good story. It could use some tidying up but it's nothing a good beta can't fix.

This was cute! I loved how Kakashi did the "Your wish is my command" thing. It felt so appropriate to have both the ninken and the toads there with them too.

Nice writing!

After reading a very depressing fic I needed this happy one. Thank you so much! It was very sweet.

I don't know if you will still be reading this review but omg this had made my day . It's so sweet beyond words ;); it's very uplifting! Thanks for this.

Cute )

Love it!

Omg! I love! I want more!

One word... AWWWWWW!:)

Stfora-chan

Wow. It's the wackiest wedding scene i've ever read but it fits them. :)

Aww, so cute. :) It was written well and I loved their vows, especially Naruto's.

Ahahaha this is EXACTLY how I'd imagine their wedding! I just can't see it being all totally serious! "And someday, if the stars align, I might even let you win an argument." And Naruto messing up with his whole "Wow. Wait! Wait!" vow, haha this is perfect!

Aww this was so cute. I loved it. Keep up the good work!

That was super cute and funny at parts like I "might even let you win an argument."

Kakashi you plan to be the bride XDDDD
It is pity he doesn't wear the Shiromuku XDD
Oh my God I like the dogs and toads act as their parents and the host of the wedding XD