Well, I read this story years ago and am finally taking the time to review it. Better late than never! It's a good one. Definitely a little silly and not quite what I expect out of these two dorks, but I love seeing how playful they are with each other. And Misty's totally right. Steam is totally integral to the shower experience. Ash is a dodo.

Wow nice work friend you made me blush so much.

/ I won't lie. This made me blush. A lot.
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Wow that was something. I had so much fun reading it. You should write more see I've read so many
pokeshipping fan fiction stories and they got boring but this one is different and I wanna read more stories like this. Great job! this story was funny and hot.

Nice nice

I can definitely see that happening lol great job. Thanx for the ride

Good work..ash and misty have their teasing love relationship. Amazing work

After dealing with Misty's temper for so many years, of course Ash thinks sex is better when she's angry.

Very nicely done! Definitely a new favorite of mine. I commend you, good sir/madam.

Oh my god, I loved this. You captured their relationship so perfectly even with all the sensual stuff and it's just so perfect. I can definitely see something like this happening to the two of them in real life. And I'm always a sucker for good sensual stuff. xD

[There was the 'get the hell away from me, I'm on my period' growl. There was the 'oh, Ash, take me right here and now' growl, which was his favorite, of course, only next to the, 'I'm growling at someone other than Ash' growl.] I loved these two lines. It already suggests at something sexy even before it's obvious that something sensual will happen eventually, which I really like; subtlety is a key to good stories. xD

I did catch a few grammar errors here and there, but overall, your grammar was great. If you want to know what you did wrong, just PM me and I'll point out each one to you. Still, I loved this. :D

Very nice. A hot little one-shot. For saying it's your first time writing Pokéshipping it was very good. It flowed well and I can easily imagine them like this when they're older.

But why does the Pokémon Master have to dress nice for work? Hah!

Keep up the good work!

Oh my gosh, this one shot was AMAZING! I can't believe you've never written either Pokémon or Pokeshipping before, because this story was absolutely perfect! You wrote Ash and Misty so wonderfully. They were both mature (well, Ash wasn't, but we can't expect him to be, now can we?) but still acted like themselves. Misty had her fiery attitude, and Ash was still just a young kid at heart.

But they were both still very adult, which was obviously the point of the story. And it came across wonderfully.

I love the whole idea of this story. It's flirty and fun, and sexy without being a full blown lemon (which, in all honesty, you could probably write EXTREMELY well if you wanted to...you wrote just enough to give the idea of what was happening without actually detailing it, although I found myself wishing it could have kept going :P)

I definitely don't think you should stop writing Pokémon, ESPECIALLY Pokeshipping! This one shot was excellently written, and I would love to read more from you. Really great first story!

Okay, when Ash thought "This is better than sex", I laughed, I'll admit it. That would be so like him!

I was in the mood for a story like what was told in the summary, and I was pleased with what I found, simple as that! Thanks!

I wouldn't call it strong T. This is borderline M in my mind, but that's my opinion.

Great story.

No words can describe how amazing well that was written :D :D :D emoticons can though ;D