Brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story.

Hi! I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading the sequel! :)

That was another fantastic instalment! I can't wait to read the third

You are a really good writer. I didn't enjoy this story as much, because it's not my type of story. Typically I don't enjoy stories where I spend a significant amount of time with the bad guy. And I'm not a huge fan of most stories that involve Time Lords and Gallifrey. But, I'm going to continue on because your writing is so good, and I found parts within the story that I really liked.

And what a neat little twist at the end!

Wahooooo! Go Doctor! *Fist pumps multiple times* *Looks around* Ahm.

Well.. Hello there! I've spent the last few days reading this lovely Fanfiction when I Remebered there was a sequel to my most favorite ever in the universe, Doctor who fiction. :D I was all like,

"YUSSSSSSS..."
:D So far, this series is hands down, one of the best fictions I've read in a looooooong while. You had me hanging on every word in the last book and now I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next.

Good job!

I just want to say, your stories would make great plots for the tv show. You are excellent at writing!

*chokes* Well, that was a Wham Line if I've ever seen one.

Fantastic story, and one hell of a cliffhanger at the end. xD Great job with the technobabble, by the way.

Okay, I have a killer headache and I need some sleep, so I'm not making a lot of sense, but really, I loved this story.

Aw yissss! I knew it! *punches the air*

Well, okay, not "knew". More like "very strongly suspected". But hey, I'm proud of myself anyhow. xD

I'm loving it. You weren't kidding when you said "adventure", huh?

HOLY CRAP!

That was definitely the scariest chapter you've written so far. My heart was actually doing flip flops.

An absolute nightmare fuel. I mean it in a good way. xD Kudos.

...oh my god.

This story...it took me a while to get into again, but this was amazing!

I really need to know how the Valeyard is Aleena's child when he's in a room on their new planet. Also, exactly what was the planet that got blown up...? That's not Earth, right?

Another amazing story! Normally, I wouldn't have gotten to this one for several weeks, since I tend to prefer reading completed stories oldest to newest, but I was so entranced by your first story (which I read practically in one sitting) that I moved on to this one soon after. I will now move on to the third installment of the trilogy, which I know I'll enjoy as well 10 out of 10 stars for this story, by the way, with a bonus 30 stars for my own sheer enjoyment and appreciation of good writing.

This fic was just as brilliant or maybe even better than the first one. Most of the canon pales in comparison to this trilogy. When I'm done reading all three parts, I'll have to reread them. Knowing the whole story will definitely change the experience.

I loved the Valeyard as a character. At first, he seemed simply evil but by the end of the story, I found it difficult to think of him as a villain. His backstory is so very tragic and I nearly cried.

I can't help feeling sorry for the Valeyard. He remembers and occasionally experiences the terribly painful experience of having those blades in his chest. He reminds me of the Master so much.

I've noticed quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes in the story. It doesn't bother me much and I don't feel like pointing out so many of them. Couldn't you get help from a beta reader?

A small thing: at the end of this chapter, it's said that Aleena's son has two hearts. However, the second paragraph of the prologue implies that he only has one.

What? A Dalek who actually shoots the Doctor when given the opportunity! I was almost expecting it to kill Rory instead.