Wow. This...this is...
YOU WROTE THIS IN TWO MONTHS? AM I READING THE DATE RIGHT?
Holy...
Okay, first off I am astounded at how well written this is. Writers that move this fast are hard to come by. And I consider myself well-versed. But the complexity of this series (and I've been researching the Compilation of Final Fantasy VII, FFVIII, FFXIII, XIII-2, and both Dissidias and compiling said research for MY stories since last December) astounds me. Me, I'm writing in the KH fandom because that's what I grew up with. I thrive on Disney and the lighter side of SE, but I can be dark if need be. I will say you're more well versed in various animes and shows and movies, so I'm outgunned.
But I am enjoying every minute of this tale. And once I get to the third installment I will continue my readings.
Kel is an interesting fellow, and my respect for his character just took a leap. The battle systems are interesting and definitely make sense, albeit rather technical, and the characters are certainly more...diverse than mine are at the moment, but that's simply because I don't have as much headway done on mine.
If you'd like to take a glance at my own stories, feel free to stop by my profile and leave a review or two. And while it may seem simplistic at first glance, I have a plethora of FF characters and other lore slated to appear. If you'd like to offer your expertise, feel free to send a reply.
Good luck and Godspeed on your future tales.

Signed,
HeartofFyrwinde

(You know who I am hahahha)

This was a really good read man VuV Glad you still haven't lost your touch with fight scenes!

and omfg ninja- fic orz *VIOLENTLY ROLLS AROUND* Though I say go with Pokemon, Pokemon is always cool man VuV

Kiako: 8I *Harumping in Besaid and probs jumped to more places I'M GOING TO MASS EFFECT*

All good it seems, Don't over work your self, but I'll be here... reading... hitting onthe girls and maybe you too... ha ha ha...

“So comes snow after fire, and even dragons have their ending.” J.R.R. Tolkien

“There is no real ending. It’s just the place where you stop the story.” ― Frank Herbert

“Ends are not bad things, they just mean that something else is about to begin. And there are many things that don't really end, anyway, they just begin again in a new way. Ends are not bad and many ends aren't really an ending; some things are never-ending.” ― C. JoyBell C.

an the best ending Quote ever...

"Bang!" Tom of toonami

It's Good.

Awesome! I liked Dragon Age 2 (even if the combat became grating and the side quests were repetitive) be interesting to see how you make it. :)

You have a SENTIENT Darkspawn in your head!? Like the Architect, The Mother or (even worse) Corypeyus!? That makes you equal part awesome and dangerous. I like it. :)

I'll vote for Naruto. Personally, I only played Pokemon once in my whole life when there were only 150 of them. Even then I don't like the idea of using tamed animals to fight your battles for you... Seems inefficient and cowardly...

OMG! I've actually played this game! Yay this is soo exciting:D

And so NMSI 2 has ended:( It was a real AWESOME story though I luvd it:) I hope everyones having fun in their own gaming worlds.

Pokemon beith my vote. Nice preview.

Interesting preview, love the style you wrote it in. I haven't played Dragon's Age 2, but I have played one. Hey, Undying Chrystyal, isn't this the universe that your Daughters of Desires came from in your FFX fic? Anyway, new series and everything. I'd give ya some tips, Kel, since I'm pretty experienced with dealing with my inner darkness, but my butt is in some galaxy far, far away. Oh, that reminds me. Wouldn't it have been hilarious if during your battle across space with Shinryuu, if that planet the Dragon God blew up had been the planet one of us had been sent too? XDDD Oh, God, how would you live yourself, man? lol That would be Karma on her period.

Anyway, I vote for the Naruto fic.

ooh! I never played Dragon Age, so this will be awesome to read. :D Can't wait, Kel!

Pokemon or Naruto? Hmm... kinda hard to pick... :/ Sorry that i can't help in the choice. ;

I'm gonna vote on Pokemon.

That was the most EPIC thing I have ever read! :D
Damn. Did you have to ruin my dramatic death moment so early? I can't help it, I have song, dance and performance where my soul used to be. XP

Of COURSE I'd block the attack to save Kel's life, Pix, if he absorbed his Harmonic powers he would heal himself and I'd be left alone to fight a regenerated Shinryuu in my beaten condition. I hate losing. I'd be willing to throw my life away to prevent that dragon douchebag from winning and getting to gloat his victory over me! XD

So now we're mortal again... This begins my first journey... For immortality. :D
First stop: Mass Effect for R&R (i.e. murder, arson and jaywalking my way to public enemy number 1) and then Prototype to steal Alex Mercers abilities. x3
*Sigh* in a perfect world. XD

Harems, huh? Personally, I don't have the capacity to pay attention to the emotions of multiple adoring women... I'll probably just recruit the ones I like for adventures and kill them when they stop being fun (nobody likes a killjoy) or leave them if they become (Ah-La Dr. Who) xP

Can't wait to see what you have cooked up for the next act, dude. But this series has DEFINITELY been one of your best ever creations. Up there with World Dom, Million Magister, Man Eater (Only read that recently. Fucking awesome btw) and 7 of the heart. XP

You're awesome. Dude.

Dude, this boss fight reminded me so much of the final set of fights for Kingdom Hearts 2. You had the super-powered warrior, then chasing the massive dragon where Lecter blew off one of its wings instead of both, then I guess that's where the similarities end. Though the secondary characters (the newbies) didn't get much screen time, there really wasn't any chance for them, seriously. Perhaps they'll get lucky in the future, who knows.
Also, *Denozo slaps Kel upside the head* Dude, women hate to be ignored, and you just did that to Kiako in FREAKIN' SPADES. She's so going to neuter your as*, regardless if you need your tools for your harem. Hmm, I wonder what game universe lets you have a harem. If this artificial universe had included anime, then you could've used Highschool DxD or Queen's Blade, but games...hmm, well, the only one that comes to mind is Agarest War and 'Harem Fantasy Slave game'. The reason we don't see many, if any, harem game-verses is cause they're called Otome games and are mostly in Japanese. Damn Japs keepin' all the good stuff to themselves. :/ But, I better not let Rose hear me say that. geehee :D

Huh. I did suspect that he would eventually kill and consume the power of Discord and Harmony. But I always assumed it was due to an expression of divine boredom as well as to weaken the gods power enough to effectively destroy them...
Bad habit of mine. If I don't know the personality of someone, I project pieces of my own on them. Probably why the "Become Everything" scheme evaded me... Really should watch that. XP

Damn. There go our meat Sheilds/distractions. But if we get the same power we had at the end of the last conflict (or more given how they will do everything they can to stop Shinryuu) then I guess they'd just be a liability up until they get killed.

Might be worth concidering killing Cosmos and Chaos after Shinryuu is gone. I wouldn't be too happy about losing or having to give up the powers we just aquired...

EPIC! This was just the best final battle ever! :D Loved the action... I wanted to steal both sets of armor. Aww... Lecter protected Kel, so sweet. lol :P See Lecter, you can be a nice guy! XD You just choose not to.

That's a pretty good ending. :3 Everyone now living their adventure lives. Don't worry, Kel, can't be mad at you about everyone else being tele'd out of the battle. It started about you and Lecter, end the conflict with the two of you working together. :3 I'm just freaking happy, I got see my characters in action, so if there's possible returns, you bet your ass I'll be excited! :D