very good lemon

loved both stories keep it up great job at writing! .

Update! Faster! and yes the lemon make it up... just updade faster 'cause i cant wait! \(*O*)/!

So Natsu Lucy is a lot more adorable to read that I expected. Usually mushy romance is something I steer away from as I like the strong but silent type, but you add just the right amount of mushy that brings that sappy smile and dreamy sigh from me. You do a beautiful job writting this pairing. I literally sped read this and its prequel with such speed I didn't want to pause to review sooner. I needed to see what happened next! I really look forward to future chapters!

-Addicted

Wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. *followed and favorited*

Nicely written lemon. I also like how you somehow keep the oblivious Natsu we know and love and the passionate sexpert we want him to be, :) read the first story as well. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Update

My my how is it that this keeps getting better and better love your writing you have a new favorite :)

Lucy's reaction to the picnic was so cute, i definitely lolz at Natsu's cluelessness about girls being a bit overemotional. but the ending...man, that was HOT! i knew this story was an M for a reason 8D

mind making another one? lol

Suuuuuugoiiiiiiii1 8nosebleed*

I really liked your first story and I really like this one too :D

Well alright! I've been waiting for this.

Can't wait for the next chapter ;) keep writing

aww I'm sucker for romantic gestures like that
I can't wait to read your next update! :)

Oh wow. I was kinda hoping the Scrabble game would get kinda sexy, haha, and then they would go off to play with each other. But I love this. Update soon!