Would you consider getting Alicia to have a thing for Chloe instead of Clark? It's just it would be interesting (not to mention funny) to see Clark get jealous of someone (a guy or a girl or both) making the moves on Chloe! XD

Interesting twist. I hope this continues. I want to know that Clark can trust his best friend

Wow this was such an interesting start. I am so sad you did not follow up on this

Really good!

NOELLE SULLIVAN

This is interesting! Do you plan on continuing it? I like the idea.

Another interesting start. This is intregueing...

Good intro
Looking forward to more

Well I really like it so far.

Interesting...very interesting.

First, I love the choice of time-frame and episode. There are so many possibilities in that alone. Second, I love that Chloe was in the elevator with Clark and Alicia. Having her witness Clark and Alicia using their powers opens up so many doors as to what may happen next, especially when you consider Chloe's entanglement with Lionel and her penchant for exposing the meteor infected. I thought Chloe's reaction to seeing Clark and Alicia's powers was spot on, as was her covering for them by lying to the teacher.

I'm very curious to see where things go from here. Obviously, Chloe's gonna wanna know more about Alicia and especially Clark. I wonder if Clark will tell them both his secret or just Chloe. For that matter, will he tell either of them the whole truth, that he's an alien, or will he let them believe that he's simply meteor infected? Also, will Alicia join the dynamic duo and become a close friend? Or maybe she'll become obsessed with Clark as in the show and have to be dealt with? Will Chlark's relationship change from simple friendship to something more? Will Chloe and Alicia vie for Clark's affections, or will they compromise and decide to share him? Okay, so that's probably not gonna happen, especially considering that this is in the teen section, but it makes for one hell of a fantasy. ;-)

In any event, this is a great start, and you've got me intrigued. I definitely want to see more of this, because it's got marvelous potential and you're doing a terrific job.

Very well done, my friend!

Can't wait to see wait happens next

I like it, continue please

Interesting start.

I had imagined that it would be Chloe instead of Alicia, but now it could get even more interesting! :-)