This is ADORABLE!

The fiction began promisingly enough and I like how John wanted to give Margaret a tour around his mill.. And the discussion that were some slight out-of-character moments but one could turn a blind eye to them.. At least I could, until Henry, a well-behaved southern gentleman was reduced to a drunk with... whisky smelling breath trying to take advantage of Margaret.. A VERY unlikely occurance and characterisation at ball.. Anything to turn him into a bad guy I guess..

So well done!

Hi there! While it's been years since you've written this, it's my first time reading it and already in chapter one and am excited to read more! All the best, Ella.

Oh how I wish fanny could be so happy too! Loved this.

It was good, Possession is my favorite probably. But this one is good too. I live your writing!

Loved this!

wow much trouble for Margaret.. hopefully She will be happy with John.

Yes! All the yes! This was so nice! I love that Fanny was so much more likeable in this story! Ahhhh, I loved it! Thank you! :)

Lovely story.

Great job writing - loved how it had twists and turns, but quickly problems or misunderstandings were resolved!

This was so sweet! I loved the “befriend Fanny” angle and thought you did a good job at the storyline and characters.

This was an amazing story! Beautifully written and I loved the relationship between John and Margaret so much. I also really enjoyed your portrayals of Mrs. Thornton, Fanny, and Mr. Bell. I liked this version of Fanny and Margaret being friends. Excellent job!

Loved the story immensly! I could read it all the time had it been never-ending!

I'm re-reading some of these. Such good dialogue and content.