Rigsby's POV is awesome!

So sweet. Thank you because that paralel of the picture was fantastic.

Now that is so sweet thanks for the read.

wonderful!:)

Wow..great chapter! :)

What a lovely picture - the first chapter is especially poignant

You bet I enjoyed it.

I got tears in my eyes man. It's beautiful.

From what would have felt sad and an impossible dream to a reality of joy. Full circle indeed. So glad you added to it. (Plus I got to reread chapter 1 to recall the details.) Thank you.

This was delightful, sweet without being sappy and such a well drawn portrait of the Jane family. I greatly enjoyed Annie's POV too. Thanks so much for this!

Thank you for the follow up. It is beautiful and fitting.

This installment is the perfect complement to your first, and I love how you’ve weaved the ending of the second story into the first. Your Annie Lisbon is a wonderful creation, and I enjoyed the conversation you constructed between her and Teresa as well as Annie’s inner thoughts about her visiting aunt and uncle. Her enthusiasm for the visit is spot-on and infectious. Bringing in the back-and-forth between Teresa and Wayne and Grace is a beautiful way to close the circle between the two stories. This is more of your great writing!

I missed your first installment, and I want to correct that right now. I appreciate the warmth in this Rigsby-centric story, and you deftly mixed in some achingly-good Lisbon-and-Jane longing. You don’t have to squint to see that! Jane taking care of Rigsby’s son is a lovely picture of how he feels about children.

Full circle, indeed! Thanks for adding this wonderful piece of fluff to the original story! It's so great to know now that Jane will be a father again! It makes up for all those bitter-sweet moments we saw on the show before - one of which was connected to Ben Rigsby too (and I assume was one of the scenes that inspired this story). I already loved the first part, but this second one just makes it perfect!

Terrific! I honestly don't remember your first chapter and I thought I had read every Mentalist story you've written - so I read the other chapter first... How sweet! These two chapters are why I love fanfic. Please keep up your excellent writing.