this is effing awesome)) the way you phrase things is just hilarious, I was cracking up non-stop)))

Hi. Awesome fic lobe it! But u should continueim sure im not the only one waiting and u gain one more fan! So neh~~x3 keep the marvelous work

Ps.:love cloud on this one xD

good story but too long without update..so sadddd

you really ar a sadist. Cloud has really no luck, and Sephiroth has no right to be angry, isn't it him that had sex with aman when he should have been with Cloud? Now, I really would like that Sephiroth understand that he has to be more indulgent with Cloud. I wonder haw they will be able to speak to each other again... but I would really hate if it was the Sensei that would won Sephiroth, so they have to make peace, and they have to go together...

thanks for the story, it's really wonderful...just, since it's been merely one year, I hope you continu to write this story... please!

Please please pretty please update. It's been months already and I really hope you haven't given up on this fic. I want to know what's gonna happen! X3

Well...the drama in this last chapter kind of killed my mood, but hopefully Cloud and Seph will make up soon, and Seph will realise what an IDIOT he's being by not snogging Cloud's brain out every minute of every day. But I digress...

Basically, this fic is made of awesome. I absolutely adore your sexy, confident escort!Cloud, who is realistically content with his chosen occupation, with just a dash of angst to sweeten the deal for your readers!

And Seph is completely fucking adorable, too, with his dorky glasses, awkward obliviousness, and...otaku-ness. Seriously, the great General Sephiroth as an otaku is just pure genius! And you somehow managed to make the inevitable OOCness that comes with such changes to the character's personality not only believable, but even pleasant!

Even Kitano-sensei...well, I kind of hate him a bit, actually, for standing in the way of the beauty that is SephCloud, but I know it's not really his fault that he fell for your wonderful otaku!Seph - I know I would've. I really admire you for creating an OC so perfect and yet completely un-Gary-Stu that I could actually forget he was even an OC, for a while there!

So, seriously, man...girl...whatever, RESPECT. You rock. Your story is

this story is good..u should continue it..

Amazing! I can't for the next chapter!

This story is so good! I hate how Sephy is even considering "future relationship" with Sensei. It"d be nice for Seph to fall in love properly rather than giving in because of lust.

Go Cloud! Fighto!

Please update soon! (even this month would be so awesome)

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

I felt really sad when Cloud got hurt. /cries

Holy cow! This is super awesome! I was reading this in the middle of class, and it literally took every ounce of my willpower not to laugh out loud. xD

Awwww poor Cloud, why is Sephiroth so mad? Oh I must know, please update this one is so wonderful!

Fabulous, can't wait for the next chapter(really)!
Loved sensei and his jealous uke character. But of course I am rooting for Cloud and his oblivious attitude(for his feelings now). Sephy is dangerous as the general. uh-oh. Poor little jealous ukes XD Can't wait when cloud discovers who seph is. Cloud being a prostitute i'm not wanting to read at all, it's going to be sad T.T . P.S.: Lol Zack , you got into a trap! Nice to read another seph/cloud fic where he isn't gay for angeal or cloud :D

I want to see more, please

OHMYHGODHOLYSHIT. This is killing me...in the most delicious way possible. I love it. I do.
I REALLY FUCKING DO, PLEASE MORE.
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE...