Great story.

I really liked it. It was the perfect amount of punishment. Very well written.
Some people will write mean things. Bottom line, remember it's YOUR fiction. You can change the characters in any way you like. You are the writer, it's your world. If someone doesn't like it, they are free to move on. No harm done. Just wanted to tell u that. Xoxo

I dpn't know who slagged this story I thought it was tastefully portrayed But wonders if the second part wouldn't involve Kili going into a sulk and abandoning the quest Hope he doesn't meet any Orcs.

Yikes! I wouldn't do anything that would make Thorin that angry.

I liked it very much. Fili and Kili are my boys. 3 Just curious; in your story, Fili remembers "the one other time" he and his brother were beaten with an amarth taur. Could you write a fic about that time?

Adorable! I did sort of tear up, a little. XD Well done!

The story was well written and wasn't too harsh.

I like a lot this oneshot! The idea of the amarth taur is very interesting, and quite believable! :P

I love your Story,

go next chapter

(I'm french, I speak a bad english XD)

courage

This was brilliant! I cannot tell you how much I loved the amarth taur concept! and I loved the position that Fili and Kili were made to be in, it was a wonderful read! I am going to be keeping my eye on you ;)

God that was so hard to read! good job:)

wow I wasn't expecting this but I have to say that this was amazing and I hope you'll go on writing.I'm waiting for the next part 3

wow that was just... wow please post more.

I had wondered when someone was going to write a spanking fic with Kili and Fili. They are rather reckless, and in need of a firm hand. All I can say is ouch.

I loved this story, but I would like to read a flashback story of young Thorin and Dwalin spanked too (and see Dwalin record too) for getting into trouble.