Reviews for Brown Eyes
CyanKitten1 chapter 5 . 6/10/2019
This is awesome so far - do you plan on updating?
CarlosRusher534 chapter 4 . 8/7/2018
MY HEART! I HAVE A CAT NAMED MR WHISKERS TOO! I would consider him my best friend as well, since I don't have any friends. Besides my mom and sister that is.
XxxAnimaniacxxX chapter 6 . 9/11/2016
Idk why I haven't read this story before. Probably because I don't read a whole lot of stories about Logan but this is really good :) you of course know I love my slash but if you want to keep it platonic that's your choice :P
Ally R. Swan chapter 6 . 8/25/2016
I wonder what will Happen now that James knows..in a way. And what happened to Logan's mom? Did he accidently shoot her? Maybe he found his dad's gun and think it was a toy pretended to shoot her not knowing it was a real gun loaded. I just had this theory. Update soon. Now I am gonna go read green eyes.
Ally R. Swan chapter 2 . 8/25/2016
I never would excepted it to be Jo. Wow. But I like this too. So good so far.
Ally R. Swan chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
Hmm interesting. Is it Kendall and was it childbirth that killed her? This is good so far.
TheGuestReviewer chapter 6 . 8/23/2016
Hello There! :)))))
UHUL! New Chapter! :D

Yes you did! :))))
OH! O.O Really? O.O
OH NO! :(((( Sorry to hear that! :(((
AWW, OF COURSE I WILL! :)))))
AWW, THAT IS GOOD THEN! :D

Poor Logie! :(((((
Must be SO HARD for him! :((((
NO, IT WOULDN'T, LOGAN! NOT AT ALL! THAT IS SO NOT TRUE, LOGAN! YOU ARE NONE OF THOSE THINGS!
Then TELL HIM, Logan! IT IS OKAY to tell someone! In fact, you NEED to tell someone, Logie! :((((
YES YOU CAN! It is NOT easy BUT you TOTALLY CAN!
Poor Logan! I understand, in a way, the feeling! :((((( But... But you need to tell someone, Logan! Oh Logan... I can TOTALLY relate to THAT BUT... You NEED to tell someone! It is NOT OKAY for you to keep SUFFERING like THAT! I know that he is your father BUT he made and is STILL making HORRIBLE things! It is NOT okay for him to continue with it and NOT be punished! :(((( YOU DON'T DESERVE ALL THIS PAIN! YOU DONT, OKAY?
:(((((
Poor Logan, SO DESTROYED! O.O :((((((( T.T
NO, SUICIDE IS NOT THE ANSWER, LOGAN! :(((((( NO, NO, NO! DON'T EVER THINK THAT, OKAY? PLEASE! :(((((
Oh... Sorry to hear that, Logan! Must be HORRIBLE to think about it! :(((((
:(((((((
Drinking is such a HORRIBLE thing! I don't like it AT ALL! :((((((
:((((((((( T.T
Oh Logan, I am SO SORRY! But we just can't get back to the past! :(((( We have to find strength inside us and keep moving forward! I know that it is easier said than done BUT it is the truth!
:((((((((((( T.T
Ah, Logie... Maybe you could focus on the good times? Don't revive the bad expeiences, try to revive only the good ones!

:(((((( I feel SO BAD for Logan! :(((((
NO! DON'T SAY THINGS LIKE THAT, LOGAN! PLEASE, DON'T! :((((((( T.T
O.O
SO YUP, IT WAS LOGAN THERE! I KNEW IT! XD
THIS OTHER BOY IS KENDALL, Logan!
Logan is SO BROKEN! :((((((( T.T
OH NO! O.O
OH NO, JENSEN AGAIN! NO! LEAVE LOGAN ALONE! :(((((
:(((((( Logan :((((((
...
:(((((
:((((((((( T.T
Why do I have the feeling that Jensen is NOT going to leave Logan alone...? :(((((

:(((
OH! O.O
AWWW, James is AWESOME! :))))
AWWW :))))
OH! O.O No! You should EAT, Logan!
INDEED, I agree with James!
YOU GO, James!
Ah, Logan! But you NEED TO EAT! :((((
No, he is not sick, James. :(
Yeah, YOU ARE SO NOT FINE, Logan! :((((
Let James help! Or at least SOMEONE help you! :(((((
AWWW, SO BEAUTIFUL! James is worried about Logie!
... Logan...
AWWW :)))) Thanks James! :D AWWW THAT WAS CUTE! LOVED THAT! :)))))
THAT is good! :)))
Ah Logie... You need to eat and you said you would! :(((
You go, James!
O.O
WELL, LOGAN, IT IS OBVIOUS! HE CARES ABOUT YOU BECAUSE YOU MEAN SO MUCH TO HIM!
HE IS YOUR BEST FRIEND AND YOU ARE HIS! SO OF COURSE HE CARES! HE WORRIES ABOUT YOU BECAUSE HE LOVES YOU! HE WANTS TO SEE YOU HAPPY, HEALTHY AND ALL THAT!
Don't say THAT, Logan! I KNOW THERE ARE LOTS OF PEOPLE WHO CARES ABOUT YOU! :(((((((
Poor Logie! :((((((( T.T Please, don't say that you don't deserve to be loved nor any thing similar, okay? YOU DESERVE! YOU DESERVE TO BE LOVED, YOU DESERVED TO BE CARED ABOUT! YOU DO MATTER!
Thanks, James! James is SO AWESOME! I am REALLY GLAD that Logan has someone like James in his life! :D :)))))))))

LOVED THE CHAPTER!
YOU ARE AMAZING!
:))))))))))))))))))))))))
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
LOGAN NEEDS TO TELL SOMEONE WHAT IS GOING ON WITH HIS LIFE!
I wonder if Logan and Carlos will meet! Or even if Kendall and Logan will "MEET FOR REAL"!
ANXIOUS, EXCITED, CURIOUS FOR MORE!

OH MY GOD?! O.O FOR REAL?! O.O OH NO!
:((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
T.T
OH! THAT SOUNDS LIKE AN AWESOME IDEA! INDEED, I THINK SO TOO!
YES, YES, YES! I AGEE 100% WITH IT! XD :D :))))))
I WOULD LOVE THAT! YES YES YES! :)))))))))))))

I did! YUP, YOU DID! Can't wait to see how the interaction between those two is going to develop! :D
I THINK THAT IS A MARVELOUS IDEA! I WANT THAT!
Uhm, James meets Carlos... I wonder how is that going to happen though! Like, how are they going to interact?
I am TOTALLY okay with BOTH, ALTHOUGH, I HAVE to say that I was thinking that Logan should meet Carlos! And it is NOT like their meeting will exclude the "opportunity" of James and Carlos meeting, they can do that later on. But I don't know, you are the Author, go with what you think is better, I know I will LOVE it either way! :)))))) XD :D
I don't think it would be TOO PREDICTABLE NOR UNREALISTIC AT ALL! I AM TOTALLY IN FAVOR OF THE MEETINGS!
Yes you did, AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR IT! :D :)))))))) But like I said, it is okay if you "change" the pairings, although I LOVE KOGAN! :P XD :))))
O.O WHAT?! O.O NO! WHY NOT?! O.O Ahhh :((((
DON'T SAY THAT! And how do you know it will suck if you don't give it a try? O.O
In my opinion you should TRY it! "Risk" it a little! I HAVE FAITH IN YOU! I KNOW YOU WILL SUCCEED!
YOU ARE AWESOME! YOU CAN DO ANYTHING THAT YOU PUT YOUR MIND TO! So, I think you should try it! I KNOW IT WON'T SUCK, I KNOW YOU WON'T SUCK! :))))))
BUT I don't want to force you! So, if don't want to do it, I TOTALLY respect it! Okay?
But what I said before still stand, you will never know until you try and I have a feeling that you will do it AMAZINGLY! ;) :D
:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
WHAT?! O.O NO NO NO! DON'T DELETE THEM! O.O
THEY ARE PART OF THE STORY! THEY ARE THE BEGINNING OF THE IDEA!
I LIKE THEM! PLEASE, DON'T DELETE THEM! O.O :((((((
But AGAIN, I don't want to force you into do something that you don't want!

AWWW, don't say that! I WANT TO HEAR MORE OF YOUR RAMBLES! XD
I AM ALL EARS! ;) :)))))
I LOVED IT!
YOU ARE AMAZING!
YOU ARE WELCOME!
THANK YOU for these AWESOME STORIES! :D
AWWWW, THAT IS SO SWEET! :)))))))
SterlingRose13 chapter 6 . 8/22/2016
Hiii!
I know I've read this before & was too shy to review, so I'm re-reading it again. :)

1st chapter: Hooo-wheee. This really hit home for me, I admit. When you wrote that he'll never be loved & that his existence is a mistake, those were my EXACT thoughts a few months ago. Phew. This guy sounds severely depressed, I sure hope things will turn around for him. I wonder how he could possibly be responsible for his mother's death?

2nd chapter: Aw, that's so sad that Logan has a less-than-ideal home life & he's getting picked on, he should tell a guidance counselor. Pretty spot-on with the insecure thoughts, I was quite shy & anti-social in high school, & whenever I was in a crowd I always thought they were looking at me or making fun of me. Y'know that paranoid feeling when a group of teens burst out laughing & you think they're laughing at you? Ugh.

3rd chapter: Wow, Jensen's such an $$, talking about Logan's mom like that. Oh man...what a horrible first day! Poor Logan! So glad he has James for support though!

4th chapter: OMG. I just gotta say...KITTIES YYAAAYYY OMG! Logan has Mr. Whiskers! ...ahem. I'm a crazy cat lady, heh heh. Anyways...yeah, cat's & other animals can really help a person with depression, as they provide non-judgemental comfort & they're totally dependent on the owner for their care. They're always happy too, haha. Hmm, seems like Logan's left with his thoughts. That can be a horrible thing (I would know, heh heh). But hey, if Kendall genuinely smiled at him, maybe he's interested in becoming friends. :)

5th chapter: Hmm, I dunno, I feel like Logan's reminiscing thoughts didn't really flow between the action that was happening, like they should've come after this dad's beating? I dunno, but that's okay, hehe. It's so sad how Logan has to put up with that, especially during the time he's supposed to be sleeping! Ah yes...James seems like such a good friend, though I imagine it's difficult to even trust him with problems like Logan has.

6th chapter: Aw, Logan needs to realize that telling someone is strength, not weakness! Strength in numbers, right?

YOU AGAIN, JENSEN! What an ass. -_-

Oh man...that ending, though. Jeeze...tugged at my heart, girl. Phew. Ah man...

I'm cool with having them meet! I like platonic relationships (just my opinion, haha) & I also like the prologues (especially this one), but it's up to you if you want to delete them. Your story, after all. :)
winterschild11 chapter 6 . 8/22/2016
Poor Logan. He needs to confide in James and let him help
TheGuestReviewer chapter 5 . 5/11/2016
Hello! :)))

I AM SURE I WILL! :))))))
Don't worry, it is TOTALLY fine! :)))
OH REALLY?! AWWWW, so Kendall and Logan will talk to each other in the next chapter? YES YES YES!
CAN'T WAIT FOR IT! :))))))))))))))))
:D

:((((((((
OH MY! POOR LOGAN! :(((((((
THAT IS SO SAD! :(((((
OH MY GOD! O.O WHAT HAPPENED?! O.O

OH MY... THAT is SO NOT a GOOD thing! :((((
:(((((
Uhm... WHAT do you mean with THAT, Logan...? O.O
Indeed... :((((((((((
T.T
POOR LOGAN! :(((((((((((((((((((
WHAT THE HELL?! :(((((((((( NO! T.T :((((((
THAT IS SO F* SAD! :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
I TOTALLY KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN, LOGAN, I FEEL THE SAME! I AM THE SAME! :((((((
NO, YOU DON'T DESERVE IT, LOGAN!
NO, NO, NO! I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND YOU, LOGAN! :(((((((((((((((((((((((((
:((((((((((((((((((((((((((
T.T
SO SAD! :(((((((((((((((

Poor Logie! :(((((
:((((((
OH! O.O James! O.O
James is going to notice that Logan was beaten up...
Oh Logan... You should tell him...
Indeed he is not, James! :((((
lol Really, Logan... As if NO ONE can see it...
James is right... I think you should tell him, Logan! :(
AH Logie... :((((
Yeah... I don't know either... I think it is because you are afraid of the "consequences" of telling someone all the things that you want to say... I think, in a way, you are scared that MAYBE James will abandon you if he knows the "truth"...
Ah Logie... :(((
AWWWWW, JAMES IS SO AMAZING! AWWWW :))))))))))
PLEASE, LOGAN, TELL HIM! :(
AWWWW, I AM REALLY REALLY LOVING THEIR INTERACTIONS! AWWWW
SO BEAUTIFUL! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL FRIENDSHIP! I HOPE LOGAN TELLS JAMES!
JAMES IS AMAZING!

OH! O.O
YES, YES, YES! I WOULD LOVE SOME SLASH HERE! XD :P :))))))))))
I LOVE KOGAN KOGAN KOGAN! XD :D
BUT I can see the others happening too, at least here in this story. I can see Jagan and Kenlos and depending on how Carlos/Logan and James/Kendall interact I can even see some Cargan and Kames. O.O
I am CURIOUS to know HOW their (Logan's and Kendall's) "encounter" is going to be! :))))))
:D
:))))))))))))))))
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
CURIOUS, ANXIOUS, EXCITED HERE!
:D
:)))))))))))))))

OH REALLY?! AWWW, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT TOO! XD :)))))))))))))))
OH!
I CAN DEFINETELY SEE SLASHES HAPPENING HERE! :P ;) :)))))))))))
TheGuestReviewer chapter 4 . 5/11/2016
Hey! :)))))

Don't worry, it is okay! :D
:)))))))
I AM SURE I WILL LOVE IT!
:D

Ah, I feel so bad fo Logan! :((((
AH, LOGAN! PLEASE DON'T THINK LIKE THAT! :(((((( I KNOW THE FEELING, I AM VERY USED TO IT, BUT DON'T THINK LIKE THAT, PLEASE! YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING PERSON!
:(((((((( I don't agree with that... There should NEVER be a reason for people to hurt others! :((((((
I KNOW the feeling... :((((
:(((((( THAT is SO SAD! :(((((
INDEED, I don't understand EITHER! :(((((
I agree with you, Logan!
I can relate to that feeling, Logan! :(((((
Ah, Logan... :((((((((
AWWW, James is awesome! :))))))
Logie... :(((((
THANKS, James! You DID the RIGHT thing! :))))
AWWWWWW, REALLY?! AWWWW LOVED THAT! JAMES IS AMAZING! :)))))
INDEED, JAMES! Forcing someone/something is NEVER a good thing... :(

:(((((
T.T
OH NO! :((((
:(((((( Poor Logie! :(
Oh... :(((
WHAT? O.O What is it?! O.O
OH! Logan has a cat! :D
AWWW :))))))
AWW, CUTE! XD :)))))
AWWWW, LOVED THAT! :))))))))))) HEY, IT IS TOTALLY OKAY TO HAVE A CAT AS A FRIEND! :D
AWWW :D
And I AM SURE he is NOT the only one, Logan!
INDEED, or else you might get a cold! O.O
Yeah, I know what you mean, Logan... :(
TOTALLY AGREE! :((((
AWWWWW :)))))) I SAY, GO FOR IT, LOGAN! :))))))))))
AH, I think you should TRY, Logie! :)))))))))
To know BOTH Kendall AND Carlos! :))))))))

AWW, THAT IS CUTE! Ah, some people SUCK! Why must there always be people that want to hurt others... :((((((

LOVED THE CHAPTER, AS ALWAYS! :D :))))
IT WAS AWESOME AS ALWAYS TOO!
AND, OF COURSE, YOU ARE AMAZING, AS ALWAYS! ;) :D
:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
I think so and I HOPE SO! XD And Carlos too! :)))))
I REALLY want to see how Carlos and Logan will interact! The same with James and Kendall!
Can't wait for more! :D
TheGuestReviewer chapter 3 . 5/11/2016
Hey There!
I AM SO EMBARRASSED HERE! O.O
SORRY THAT IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO CONTINUE REVIEWING THIS STORY! O.O
:(
BUT I am going to continue NOW and I assure you that I will "finish" it this time!

AWWW, I AM SURE THAT I WILL LOVE IT! ;) :))))))))

OH MY! O.O
POOR LOGAN! :((((((
Ah, WHY is THAT? Logan didn't do ANYTHING TO YOU, Jensen! It is NOT OKAY for you to hurt him! :(((((
OH MY! O.O
THANK GOD he didn't punch Logan!
You go Logan! THAT is the correct way of ending a fight! You should NEVER FIGHT BACK!
I AM WITH YOU, LOGAN!
:((((
WHAT?! O.O OH MY GOD! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU JENSEN?! THAT WAS SO MEAN! THAT WAS SO NOT OKAY! HOW COULD YOU?! O.O
:(((((((
DON'T LISTEN TO HIM, LOGAN! IT WAS NOT YOUR FAULT!
POOR LOGAN! :(((((((((((((((((( T.T
OH! O.O I wonder who it is!
UHUL! HELLO THERE, JAMES! THANK YOU! :))))))))))))))))
THANK YOU, JAMES! THANK YOU! :))))))))))))))
AWWWW :))))) THANKS TO YOU, HE "DIDN'T"! :D
Ah, it is OKAY to cry, Logan!
Thanks again, James! :D

OH! O.O
Ah, Logie... :((((
AWWW, JAMES, YOU ARE AWESOME! :)))))))
XD
AH :((((
YES, AWWW, JAMES IS SO AMAZING! THANK YOU JAMES! YOU ARE AN AWESOME FRIEND! :))))))))
I understand what you mean Logan, I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND IT!
BUT I think it will be GOOD for you to talk about some of them!
:) xD
Flies and Stuff! XDDD :))))))
:)))))
OH! O.O
WHAT?! O.O WHO DID THAT?! AND WHY? POOR LOGIE! :(((((((
:(((((
Thank you, James! Ah, Logan doesn't have anything to eat now anymore... :((((
AWW :))))
I AM LIKING James' and Logan's interactions! :)))))))
I agree with James! You NEED to eat something, Logan!
O.O :((((
T.T

I LOVED IT!
POOR LOGAN, SUFFERING SO MUCH, THOUGH! :(((((
YOU ARE AWESOME!
:))))))))))))))))))
TheGuestReviewer chapter 2 . 12/23/2015
Hello There! :))))))

OH MY! O.O Dark?! O.O
Poor Them! :(((((

OH! So "Brown Eyes" is Logan? :)))))))
Really Logan?! You are not in the mood to go to school? O.O
Ah, Logie. :((((
YUP! I think you made the right choice, Logan!

lol
OH! Ah. :(
:(((((((
Poor Logan... :(((((
Wow... THAT is AWFUL! :(((((
Ah. :(
OH! O.O

Ah... :(((((
OH MY! O.O WHY?!
WHY ARE THEY STARING AT LOGAN? O.O
OH!
AH... :(((((((
O.O Who is this?! O.O
OH MY! POOR LOGAN! What were the odds of this boy being in the same school! :(((((
ARRG! LEAVE LOGAN ALONE! YOU BULLY! ARRRG
OH! KENDALL KENDALL KENDALL! :)))))))))
OH! O.O What was that...?
Oh, Logan, don't say those things... Cause EVERY TIME someone says something like that, things DO GET worse... :(
OH! Some Logan and James are best friends? THAT IS AWESOME! :)))))))
GOOD TO KNOW that you have a BEST FRIEND, Logan! :))))))
AWW! :))))))))) At least one good thing, uhm, Logan! :)))))
AWWWWW :)))))))))
Ah Logie... :(
OH! I HOPE SO! Logan needs his BEST FRIEND near him!
Why is that? O.O
AWWW! I SENSE SOMETHING happening between these two! xD :))))))
"Love at first sight" maybe? :P ;) :D :))))))))

OH REALLY?! O.O
KOGAN KOGAN KOGAN! :)))))))
Nothing against Jo. I like her, I just don't feel like Kendall and Jo should have been made a couple... I don't think they "match" at all! O.O
I think it should be SLASH! :P XDDDDDD I am just kidding! I am okay with anything that you decide that will be better for the story! :)

I feel so bad about Logan! Poor Logie!
I hope he finds someone who will love him for who he is! :D
TheLoganTrain chapter 5 . 12/8/2015
I feel so bad for Logan. Please make this a Kogan love story! U can never have enough Kogan in your life !
NickiNameAccountKiller chapter 5 . 12/6/2015
Good chapter! :) I love all you're stories by the way!
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