Your opening was great. Teenage fantasies...Classic.

Honestly, I really liked how you portrayed Bill in this fic. Teddy seemed a bit too pin-y for me, but Bill made this fic with his stereotypical dad behavior.

I really liked the role that Andromeda played in this, and how nice and motherly she seemed :) Teddy and Victoire themselves... I didn't really feel any personal connection to or investment in either of them, but they were kind of likeable, and I liked how romantic they were with each other.

Great story. I love Teddy and Vic so I liked this story. I really liked your vision of their starting relationship,

This was completely adorable, yet again, greatly written!

Teddy/Victoire is one of my favorite next-generation pairings(: I think you did a real good job at writing them and I really enjoyed this. I can see Teddy missing her terribly while she was gone. My favorite part was probably the ending(:

A story of loneliness and romance. Such a nice portrayal of it. Kudos to you.

I think you did a great job of it. I like the way this is framed, and I don't often read from Teddy's perspective, so that was a nice change of pace. The dream is done nicely, and Andromeda is great in this, as is Bill's appearance. Really I just loved this. The flashback about what "I'll miss you" meant to them was great and so was... the rest of it. Nice work. :)

D'awww. that was really cute. I've tried to write this pairing so many times but it always comes out wrong. Teddy missing Victoire is adorable and I LOVE Andromeda's bit in this. She reminded me of a more chill version of Mrs. Longbottom. I never really noticed that similarity between Teddy and Neville but I like the idea now. But Victoire's reaction to seeing Teddy was very sweet, as was the last line. Really nice job :D

I'm not the hugest fan of Victoire/Teddy, but I did enjoy this fic. I like your characterization of Teddy, first of all, and I can kind of picture him acting the way that you portrayed him as acting here. I love Bill's reaction at the end, as well, that just seems very in-character for him. I love the way you wrote Andromeda, also, she's a really good guardian for Teddy. Teddy's automatic reaction to her coming into his room at the middle of the night totally made sense, too, since he's in Auror training. I don't know, I just really liked that part even though it was small. Spelling and grammar was very good, also, and I didn't notice any mistakes. The ending sentence is so sweet, also, I love how Teddy's sure that he'll marry her one day. Very nice work!

Loved it :p Teddy/Victoire is definitely one of my favorite pairings :p I think you did a real good job at writing them and I loved the way you ended it :)

Oh my Teddy really is a bit of a dramaqueen, isn't he. So emotional over a month's old relationship... But I love TeddyVictoire, so he's forgiven. ;) I liked the ending, when Victoire rushed to greet Teddy first before her parents. That's so typical of when you're in love.

Aw, cute!

Ah, Tedoire perfection at its best! How interesting that the kiss on the platform mentioned in the Epilogue would be their first kiss. Interesting portrayal of the characters, I thought Andromeda was rather grandmotherly. Bill's line: ["Trust me, Vic. You're not getting married for some time. Not if I can help it."] made me laugh out loud, especially since he added, 'Not if I can help it'. Good job!

It was so sweet! Really lovely! (: