This story has like changed me. seriously i wanna die. I love this so much i wish I had love like lina and xelloss. i KINDA WANNA KILL XELLAS THOUGH! hehhehehehehehehehehehe plotting the murder.

You know what? This story is now soo sad. I wanna cry. You are an amazing author you know that? I cant stop reading this fucking story im hooked and i stayed up untill 4 last night reading.

I love your Fanfics.

I haven't read the first two stories, figured that I'll start with this one. I'm atill at chapter two and I can't figure out why there aren't more reviews. Your fic definitely deserves much more! I'm already loving this fanfic o

I think you write splendidly. And it's such a shame you're not getting the number of reviews you deserve. Your fanfic is fascinating, and your characterisation is superb. I like the way you tackled the Mortality Vs Immortality issue in 'Penance'. And I look forward to reading the rest of this fanfic, bit by bit. Thank you for this marvellous contribution to the fandom.

Sometimes Gourry is the best of them all. I am really impressed at your writing, and grateful to have happened upon it.

This is really touching, I like it and I will read the next sequel, so see ya

sayo

This is a wonderful story full of emotion, and twists.

The writing is excellent and your story is amazing, really yet the idea of gaining and loosing and therefoe not really loosing humanity and how to handle it... amazing.

I'll see ya soon in the next review

sayo

Ah...this is still Penance, all the way from chapter one to here. The next chapter begins with a reference to Lecia, so it belongs to the correct story.

-KS

FYI- This should be chapter 1 or Reckoning, but it contains chpater 1 of Penance. Same goes for chapter 2. Chapter 3 is correct, I believe-KS

*grumbles and throws a temper fit* You're going to finish this series when? I've read it all and I'm begging here..please...finish it! PLEASE! It's wonderful and draws me in..I think I went without sleep for three days and never left my computer, just so I could finish it. *drools* must...have...more...

ACK! *on the verge of tears* wonderful...absoloutly fantabulous...*knows it's not a word but doesn't care* Geez this is a good story...WAhh...*has to sleep for the night* However I will continue to read the rest of thr series...It's so well done!

with circumnavigation and penance i was so utterly spellbound: you write amazingly, beautifully, detailed... etc. in this story, even though well-written, i found myself increasingly annoyed with Lina as never before. always a highly respected and favorite character, i found myself utterly despising her sissy stupid self. she can't choose? ok, i can maybe buy that. afraid of having the responsibility to being tied down at such a young age as a mother? yes of course, it's scary. but i had hoped for so much more from her - not to cop out and not even name the poor thing! what a truly horrible bitch mother she'd make, it seems. her constant running away wasn't like the strength of lina inverse i've come to expect - the girl who swallows fear and always shines beautifully in the face of adversity. i honestly couldn't see why gourry or more especially xellos still cared so deeply for her when she's being such a spoiled little brat running away and just being damned hate-able, in my opinion.

in any case... i love your style of writing. i highly enjoyed having been fully enchanted and immersed in your stories.

I started crying halfway through this. It's so beautiful. I loved it as much as I love Pennance and Circumnavigation. Thank you PM-sama!

And so the plot thickens. This series (as far as I have read) is extremely well written. You have a knack for character developement that I don't usually see in fan-fics. I look foward to reading the rest of the series.