Reviews for Merlin's Great Trial
mizzymel chapter 4 . 1/4/2016
I'll be honest I hate first person POV fics, so I think I passed this one up the first time I came upon after reading the first paragraph. But I just read your other fics and found them to be really good and well written so I decided to give this one a try anyway. I'm glad I did. I'm still not a fan of the pov, but you write a compelling story and make it enjoyable anyway.

I really like what you're doing with Merlin and Mordred here. I also like the fact that Merlin is thinking as candidly as I wished he'd done in the show. He knows the knights are arrogant, he knows they all change and I loved him pointing it out. In the show he starts off so strong and then he becomes a bit of a pansy who is willing to be a doormat. It's always infuriated me that Arthur would take his entire circle of associates whom were the same class as him and elevate them, then leave him there to be lorded over by his peers. I always wondered why nobody thought that as offensive and insulting as I did.
wryter501 chapter 11 . 12/8/2013
damn, what a last line! whew!
wryter501 chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
speed walking - that cracked me up... have you ever seen them do that at the olympics? it's absolutely ridiculous... but why can i see colin morgan doing just that? :)
wryter501 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
you know, i always wondered if mordred's choices might have been different had merlin told him of the prophecy... beginning of season 5 he did honestly want to be a good knight...
SpangleyPony chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
I did. Thanks for writing :-)
KmKizmet chapter 10 . 9/17/2013
"I don't think the spell worked."
That's funny.
I love it so far
AnotherMerlinFan chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
Great ending to your lovely story! :)
Akemi-Malfoy chapter 15 . 8/2/2013
I really loved this story, you're a great writer! I'm just kinda sad it didn't have more chapters. The ending seemed somewhat rushed to me :( But I'm glad I found your story, even if it was already finished :) I'll keep an eye on your other works ;) keep writing!
Moon Fox chapter 15 . 7/31/2013
Wonderful wrap up to the story. I loved reading it!
LeilaDarkholm chapter 15 . 7/30/2013
loved it! :)
LeilaDarkholm chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
I can imagine the knights faces when they see Killgarrah! xD
LeilaDarkholm chapter 12 . 6/20/2013
Cool :)
1983Sarah chapter 12 . 6/20/2013
Uh-oh, sounds like she choose and it wasn't Merlin!
EnsignRo chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
Just found your story and love the show terribly,definitely had several more years of story telling!
Moon Fox chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
EEP! Dragon's out of the bag I think! I wonder how much Arthur saw. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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