Nice story has potential for more thanks for the read

Is it Inception to review this? Salvationdearception? Obviously I love your taste in music c: I also love your dialogue; the banter in this is really charming and sounds authentic. Works well with the bittersweet setting. A lovely scene.

Wow : )
In-character, touching and even a lil poetic.

And thanks for pointing out that RJ now "knows" that Jane loves Lisbon. (Because that's what Lorelei thinks) :I didn't catch that implication before.

This is the start of a good story, I would be very interested on how Jane would protect Lisbon, and at what cost? Would it cost Jane his friendship with Lisbon and the team? Huummm...

you should continue this! it is really well written

Good tag. I rather like Jane's resolve at the end to find a way to protect Lisbon.

That was amazingly in character, I can totally imagine this scene. Well done!
And there really should have been a scene like that- would have been better for my emotional state at least.

You should continue this and write more fics. You're a good writer and I really like this story! I hope you choose to continue this!

I really loved this!