Reviews for Beginning
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
Oh so sweet thanks for the read
rcfan77 chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
Absolutely brilliant! :)
LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
This is lovely, all about the aching need to comfort a friend-more-than-friend in dire need of comforting. Romance is garish and demanding by comparison. Thanks.
Haribo2012 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
sweet i love it!
NorticLatot chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Such a beautiful, perfect ficlet:)
Lobster00 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Your story was perfect. I usually am quite touchy about OOCness but somehow, reading your story I found myself not giving a damn about it ! More like I didn't even ask myself whether it was OOc or not. I just enjoyed this moment in the intimacy of Jane and Lisbon. Sometimes I get frustrated with the show when they cut off the character's reaction or emotion (for example at the end of "Fugue in Red" after Jane regains his memory...) and somehow you managed to give an answer to one of those moments ! So thank you, thank you, thank you ! I can't wait to read your other fictions !
Alydia Rackham chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
My heart broke about forty times during this. Not a single word spoken-and you made it more powerful than anything I've read so far.

Brilliant, brilliant work.
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Very atmospheric, and tender without being sappy.
Rosepeony chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
This was lovely... I can really see something like this as a scene in TM, although probably shorter.
Nedra1212 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Great tag! Have always loved your stories! Thanks for sharing!
chibinoyume chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Aww.. nothing like a wordless 'thank you' from Jane..this was lovely. I did have a bit of trouble picturing some of the shuffling in their postures, them being in the car, the console in the middle and all. But aside from that, it was a great read. I didn't expect him to cry, and probably neither of them had, but it fits, it's understandable, I can't imagine the amount of frustration it may entail.

Also, driving off while holding hands? Full of hope. I really liked this :)
MerriWyllow chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Hurrah for J Judit J for getting you writing again! This was very affecting, tender, avoiding being too sweet or too easy. It sits just right in the mind. Good stuff!