It’s a great story !

j'aime bien.

it was gohan how named goten

aww cute love Gohan, Goku and Goten

Hi, XxFearTheFluffxX, this is bluelizard91 posting on your story 'His Name is Goten'! Let me just say: AAAWWWWWW! This story is so sweet! Chubby angel...that is just adorable! I'm really glad that Gohan and Goten didn't end up being Archimedes or Horatio, or something LOL! Keep up the good work!

Aw. This was cute. And I loved the name suggestions from ChiChi. Of course she would suggest something like that. Nicely done.
-D101

very sweet :)

That was super cute!

Hey hey!

I would like to say that I loved the little one shot! I must say that I have the very same soft spot for the Gohan and Goten brotherly relationship. Both characters are my favorites and this is the main reason why.

I have quite a soft spot for fluffy Gohan/Goten stories. As many as I've read, I can honestly say that yours is unique. Although concept is the same, the way you wrote about it is unique. I particularly like the little bit about the names that Chichi had planed for the little guy. It added some humor that most of these stories don't usually have.

Although I personally love the fluff between the two, I admit that I have my limits. Your story had a good amount of fluff without it being too over the top, which is another reason why I enjoyed it.

All in all, I enjoyed the fic and I look forward to future work from you. Hopefully this is only the beginning!

-Power9987

I loved this fanfic. It was very well-written and good job on keeping the Chi-Chi, Gohan, and Goten in character. I look forward to read more of your fanfics.

Two words, ma'am: simply incredible. It's too darn high, the amount of fluff.

I absolutely adore stories of this kind, although that might be a biased statement since those are my favourite characters. I'm such a sucker for the brotherly bond shared between Gohan and Goten... but hey, the fact remains.

I like your writing style as well; you actually managed to describe and convey so very perfectly to the reader the feeling experienced by the older brother and how he thought about his newborn baby brother. It was very effective, I tell you that, and let's not mention your impeccable use of punctuation, formatting, and grammar. It's such an eye candy.

I was actually expecting Gohan to explain where the -ten came from—the kanji for that syllable (天) means 'heaven'—since I thought that would've given more zest, but alas, he didn't... but that was no pressing matter. I mean, who needs that when your hands are already full of more than a barrelfull of fluff?

Well, that's that. I believe my point is made... you've done a job well done with your story. For providing me a quality read, I thank you.

Have a nice day!