| Reviews for Some Cream, please! |
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TheVoiceOfTheJellicles chapter 1 . 9/12/2016 XD So adorable. Also, Mungojerrie needs to learn to shut up before he says the wrong thing. FAR too many close calls. ;) |
tmwillson3 chapter 1 . 8/5/2016 Awww these two are cute! And double awww... babies! :D |
rovalo chapter 1 . 8/22/2012 I LOVED IT! So cute! I love Mungojerrie/Rumpleteazer pairings! :D |
ShegoRulz chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 Aw, this was just adorable :') Great job! |
Pink Schmetterling chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 Awwww, that was so cute! Haha, Mungojerrie's (slightly incompetent at times) attempts to compliment Teazer were sooooo cute. He's like "Errr...what do you WANT me to say?" XD I was really surprised at the twist at the ending, where Rumple's just like "DUH of course I'm pregnant." Haha, it was very adorable. And your grammar was almost perfect, so don't worry about that. I would never guess that English is not your first language from reading this, because you write in it BEAUTIFULLY :D Excellent job! |
Cocobutterrox chapter 1 . 8/18/2012 XD I love your summary ;) "You are waiting for your cream, aren't you?" Rumpelteazer mewed approvingly. "But you don't get any." Grrr annoying little pest! XD XD I love the growing relationship between Teazer and Jerrie :) :) It's so funny and cute! o_O I think this is all an illusion of the mind... O_O WAIT! I just realized what's going on...I think...Rumpleteazer is expecting :D :D Ha! I was right! ...I'm really slow at these things xD I love this oneshot! It's well-written and I enjoyed it very much :) Keep writing! ;) |