This is such a good fanfic and really romantic! Please do more!

What, "foreign abilities", does Ash Ketchum have? He's just a pokemon trainer. And you left out his pokemon, the one thing that makes him unique. How does Ash Ketchum know about rock trolls & wildfire? The only one who knows this stuff is Ortho & you left him out. Ash Ketchum is smart, but this is a different universe entirely, one of which he knows nothing about. And now Kameo knows about Thermite too'? She's supposed to learn these things as she goes along, not know them by default. It's Ortho's job to give information. Deep Blue does not have claws & lava cannot be white. How can Ash Ketchum sense shadow trolls? How is he a better fighter than Kameo? She has the Element Of Power. He does not, which makes lt impossible for him to harness elemental warriors. His & Kameo's conversation is so unnatural, I don't know how they ended up kissing. They have character & you removed lt. No, no, no. The warriors cannot, "nod". They're not physically there. They're merged with the Wotnot Book. Only the elemental sprites can be physically there. Ash's full name is, 'Ashley Satoshi Ketchum'. I don't know where you got, 'Ashura'. 'Ashura', doesn't even register as a real forename. There's too' many things going on that I don't understand here, like Ash's transformation. Headcanons are welcome in fanfiction, but you can't just force these things on us. You have to introduce them gradually & actually explain them, which you did not. There are more grammatical errors & misnaming than I care to count. It's good to see someone writing a Kameo: Elements Of Power fanfiction; & lt's interesting to see lt crossed over with Pokémon, which I once wanted to do, but you have to do lt right. And this is far from done right. It needs a rewrite.

Why would Ash & Kameo need an elemental warrior alternate skin, "just in case"? They serve no purpose other than to look cool. Why did Ash's bookbag become a pouch? That makes no sense. How does Kameo know which crystal eye Ash has this early on? She's supposed to find out about the types of crystal eyes from Ortho, which you neglected to include. Why would Ash ask lf the two new shadow trolls (speaking of which, that's another issue. The game states that there are only seven remaining shadow trolls.) are stronger than the last? What would give him that idea? And how does Kameo know that they are? Remember: this is her first time fighting shadow trolls as well. The dialogue is unnatural I should mention. It's just emotionless exposition. How did Ash get wings? I really don't understand these changes. I have to give you credit though: you called them elves instead of fairies. I hate when people call them fairies. How does Kameo know what a human is? No humans are seen or mentioned in the Enchanted Realm. Why is Ash warning Kameo about Old Ma'Wood*? He knows just as much as she does about him. Why would Ash Ketchum want to be called, 'Ashura'? That sounds feminine. 'Satoshi', makes more sense, though I'd rather just call him, 'Ash Ketchum'. And you told all of the chapter's events in the header. Why bother reading lt?

How can there be two of Pummel Weed? There are only one of each elemental warrior. And why would Kalus see Ash as a threat? She doesn't know him. How can he suddenly transform into warriors?

Awesome 3 chapters continue please.

I understand the plot and everything, but I never heard of this crossover. Still great
story.