One of the most beautifuly written stories i ve read.

This is everything I didn’t know I needed right now.

I've never left a review before so I am not sure how this works. I also don't have an account or anything. I know that you wrote this a super long time ago but I just wanted to say that this story was incredibly beautiful and wonderfully written. I've been really struggling this week and this really made me feel a sense of hope. Funnily enough, this wasn't even the type of fic I was looking for but it caught my attention. It sort of seems silly to put so much weight of a fanfic but this genuinely helped me and I want you to know that. I hope you see this and know that this thing that you created genuinely helped put someone in a brighter headspace. Thank you for making this.

Hol dude, what the shit, this was hands down the best frostiron story I've ever read what the frick frack

Thoughtful and unique story, I cried reading this. Thank you so much for sharing this incredible fic!

Oh...oh, wow. Oh, my Thor. You are a really amazing author! I like this direction you're taking Loki in, because that is really the way Tom Hiddleston portrays Loki in the movies. I feel like Loki's been misunderstood and broken far too much, which was why he turned villain in the first place. Like you said, he had emotions and was destroyed by them, and I like exploring that side of Loki. The emotional side, the side that looks past the tricks and lies and jokes and goes deeper, really connecting with his heart and his mind and figuring out just who the Hel Loki Laufeyson really is underneath that facade he so bravely puts up. Personally, I'm a Thorki shipper, so normally I read and write this in a Thorki setting, with both Thor and Loki trying their best to unravel the mystery of who Loki is, but I love the way you're taking this with the FrostIron too. There's not many author out there who really seem to connect to Loki and are able to really get inside his head and his heart and explore and define what the real Loki really is. I think the way you've written this is a lot - is just really about, you know, finding yourself. Tony's figuring himself out as he tries to piece Loki together, and vice versa - Loki is figuring out who he is and who he can be as he also begins to understand Tony and everything he's been through. These two are a great pair even though it's not my principal OTP, and I love the way you write both of them on this journey of self-discovery. You're a great writer. Keep it up.

Thank you for the story, I enjoyed very much. Very well written and I am going to read the the one of Thor and Steve.
Thank you,
Juanita

I loved the story. I hated you author note at the beginning of chapter four, which made me worry someone or everyone would die. It seemed like a cruel spoiler to say we would hate the ending. Turns out nobody died, and the ending was sweet. A thousand people may have quit reading at the beginning of chapter four, due to your unfortunate, stupidly self-denigrating author note. Three uses of peak or peaks or peaked should be changed to pique. Peaks his interest should be piques his interest. The verb definition is the one you should see.

Lovely

That. Was. Perfect.

This was a delightful read, truly. So very amazing, and there's the fact I could actually see this happening.

very poetic. incredible writing. :-) GREAT story!

This was so incredibly well written! I’ve never read the Little Patience but it makes me want to. And the development of Tony and Loki’s relationship is realistic and done flawlessly. Just an incredible job handling the characters and the depth and complexities of their minds and emotions. Loved it!

This was amazing and such a happy ending

OMG... i dunno what to say XD I cried, I laughted... I love the story! It's just perfect. Keep writing, you are a very good writer.
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PD.: One of my favourites Frostiron stories, and I almost read all of them XD