This was a really fun story to read! You had me laughing out loud many times throughout! Loved the use of Kirk’s mom in such a whimsical way, also just the mixing in of all the different poetry, the singing, and then adding in McCoy, and Spock calling him Queen Isabells...just fun!

Would love too, can you do another of them going back to the farm, Kirk and Spock, and maybe finding a fun way for them to end up “hanging out” in the a Treehouse? Maybe then just even doing an overnight kind of “camp out” in the yard beside, like “kids” would have done? It could be both funny and sweet...especially if Kirk’s Dad or even Grandfather had built the Kirk Treehouse...and also because one imagines that Spock would never have been exposed to such a opportunity...?

Thanks!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! That was HILARIOUS! I sooo wish that that had actually happened in an episode of star trek!

My teacher made me learn ocaptain my captain. This is really funny!

Just LOVE it! Exactly my sense of humor. And I had to fight a lot not to fall off the chair...

Fantastic! Liked soooooooo much!

I'm already wondering how you sustain this randomness and hystericalness, and there's still the vast majority of your work to go through. *shakes head disbelievingly* Anyway, ridiculously good chapter, as always. I love this stuff!

I detect influence from your school at the time. ;-) I was actually just reading Hamlet (not in the original Klingon, sadly...) I love how you manage to write the characters both in and out of character at the same time, if that makes any sense at all.

OMG that was hilarious! :D Especially when Spock kept OM-ing the whole time. And Jim's long winded speeches... ROFL. Too much fun!

HAHAHAHAHA! That got me laughing. Which woke up my mom and scared my cat. This was very well written and entertaining. Awsome job.

Oh, dear God, I hope next time I read one of your stories it won't be in the middle of the night, so that my poor neighbors won't have to listen to my hysterical laughs while trying to get some sleep.

Thank you for the great story!

That was a wonderful story! You did it perfectly. I just love the way it was written as a screenplay rather than straight up. Somehow that made it seem more realistic. I've never heard of anyone following anyone by following the trail of nerve-pinched bodies, but if I do I'll let you know. That's hysterical. And the people in the theater were awesome. All the stuff at the cave was great - I can't find fault anywhere in this. The way McCoy discerned whether or not Spock was still crazy by the random Superman comments was hilarious. The ending was perfect. And I just love the way you've kept character. The only unusual thing was Kirk's risk obsession and that just made everything funnier. GREAT job.

This is unbelievably hilarious! I love it! It's awesome the way you've set it up as a screenplay with stage actions and descriptions of emotions shown and everything. The poetry is hilarious and the characterization is really good despite the unusual occurences and weird happenings. Usually in something like this, the characterization is thrown to the four winds, but you've managed to make it hilarious and still stay true to the characters. I really like Kirk's mom and McCoy's mom was good, too. Spock's antics are so funny and I love the way they're completely random but they seem to make sense to him. I can't wait to see how this comes out.

hahahahaha very funny.

This has been AMAZING! One of the funniest things I've read in a while. Keep up the good work.

i've read this story about five times, it is great.

i love the part when Spock starts talking about the dead captain and Jim freaks out. utter insanity.

oh and i love Jim's speech that he never gets to do... funny