Woa deep

No lie, this really made me cry! It was so beautiful!

I've been slowly working my way through your stories (slowly meaning this is only the second one I've found time in my schedule to read)! This was, as ever, a beautiful story, the imagery and diction was breathtaking. I even had a few laughs: Alois and the 'purdy' people, the triplets excellently choreographed speech patterns, etc.

If I were to make one suggestion, and I saw that you recognised this in the A/N, it would be to blend the transition from light-hearted to melancholy a bit smoother. The sadness was a bit sudden, but I understand your intentions.

Finally, I'd like to extend my praise on your astounding imagery. I could picture everything perfectly, especially during the butterfly sequence, but not only that; I could feel everything. Every emotion. The butterfly's frantic agony, Alois' pain... I think you accomplished your goal for this piece expertly.

I expect you'll be seeing more reviews from me in the future, I am definitely going to be reading many of your other pieces!

Again, you have captured Alois' emotions perfectly. You have also captured the emotions that I myself feel. You may be the best writer that I have come across.

it was completly beautiful!

When I first saw the second series, I really did not like Alois. At all. Then one night, he jumped in to my brain yelling, "Hey! I'm an interesting character! Go watch episode 8 again!" So I did. And apparently, that's what it took for me to figure him out. I still don't really like him, but I feel absolutely terrible for him. He's still an intriguing character, and I'd like to write more on him so I can try to sort of figure him out for myself.
I love the symbolism of the spider and the butterfly. Too often, it's overused. But you've used it effectively and in a way that's true to the story, not just using it for the sake of using it. I appreciate that.
I am definitely favoriting this story. It's well written, it's in-character, and it's somehow heart-wrenching.

Whoa...that's pretty deep for Alois...loved it! :)

Beautifully written I was left speechless.

Finally got around to here! I can tell that you are deeply in love with the dilemma that is Hannah and Alois. And I definitely believe that the triplets will talk your ears off if asked to share with the world their daily thoughts. And if you're wondering about my story, I'm trying to get the plot together before I start to get too excited and make things happen for no reason! Anyway, awesome stuff you have here and I can't wait to see more from you!

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Ohmigosh well done! Lol purdy
I felt so bad for Alois in the end though! He needs a hug.

Beautiful story. The story is a little misleading at the beginning. It was really funny to read and picture Alois intoxicated xD... Nevertheless, I loved your insight on Alois. He is a complex character with his unpredictable and mercurial nature; however, you managed to figure him out.
I absolutely loved this one-shot.
Continue with your wonderful writing n.n

This is SAD. I will never be able to look at a butterfly without bawling again...