that was just too cute! it just makes me love goku and chichi even more. I love their innocent yet natural relationship and it's probably the most purest out of all the relationships in DBZ.

I want more X3 I just love it! And I want to know Goku's reaction! :D

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It is so cute omg I love it please keep writing
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I like it so much, you should really continue it :) waiting for the next chap..

Great story so far! :)

Cute! - looking forward to their good news.

This is your first fanfic? O.o Wow. Definitely doesn't seem like it to me. You did pretty good for your first time. n_n

Can't wait for the second chapter! Seems cute. : 3

AWWWWWWWWWW! so cute :3 I don't often read Goku Chi Chi fics... unless they are good and THIS is good!

(megusta) :3

Lady Weavile

Not bad. The character voice is a little off but it sorta makes sense as this is a very special occassion and rarely do we see Chi Chi happy in the series (Usually she is mad.) OVer all, nicely done. Just a tip for grammar though. When writing dialogue, the comma goes inside the quotation marks and if the dialogue ends in a period you don't write the period. Uh... That looks confusing. Okay. Here is how you write the dialogue:
"I am the light in the darkness.", Goku said.
This is how it should be written:
"I am the light in the darkness," Goku said.
You don't need the period because it is understood he is saying it in a normal way. However, when you are using a question mark or exclamation mark you need to write it like this:
"This cannot be!" he screamed.
See? No comma. Don't ask me why. Grammar barely makes sense to me. I just know how to use it.
Anyways, I hope this advice is helpful.
-D101

Oh my! This was very good! I thought this was adorable! Well written, and Goku and ChiChi were in character! I am REALLY looking forward to the next chappy! Update soon

Omigoku! I absolutely adore it! :D Goku and Chi-Chi are perfectly in character, it's well-written, and just ... Gosh, it's adorable! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Cute story! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Good stuff! I look forward to seeing how this ends up. It's nice to see cute DBZ fanfiction!