Reviews for Less Than Perfect
aaabbbcc chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Hahha he can probably brush them in a millisecond.
mimosa eyes chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Ah, hinty hints. May I just say that indeed, your dialogue here is in-character (assuming I'm a good enough judge of that). I like such snippets. This one in particular was especially nice, because even though it's a new situation we've never seen the characters in before, in-canon, you managed to keep the dynamic between Wally and Artemis convincing and realistic. I like the casualness of it all, the way they're so comfortable with each other's jibes.

For the record? I freaking miss them too. I'll probably steal off after this to write guiltless Spitfire fluff.

On another note: YOU LIKE THRIVING IVORY. 'Like pretty girls need cowboys / I need you here tonight'? 'We're gonna make it if it takes all night'? AND SNOW PATROL: 'show me a garden that's bursting into life'. AND COLDPLAY (Fix You). Plenty other examples of our similar musical preferences, but AGGGH. Continue being asterous, and good day to you.
Starlightlovesya123 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Gahaha, I love the imagery of this. Wally and Artemis, rolling over and over on a couch, surrounded by pizzas and junk drawers full of menus. SUCH a wonderful headcanon. And well-written too. The way you phrased it made it much less boring than it might have been.

And agh! Can we fangirl out about today's episode, PLEASE?
bluepianos chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
What the heck, the 'Review this Story' button suddenly became larger, thicker, and a lot bluer. I LIKE IT.

And you didn't need to know that.

This was so freaking adorable. Hahaha, perfect Wally makes an imperfect Artemis when it comes to the rules of a relationship and I love that. He's the more romantic one and she's the badass. I love it I love it I love it.
Shokugeki no DxD chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Excellent story. I hope spitfire returns to us soon.
Mozzie128 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Adorable.

Amusing.

AND

In character.

Loved it.
Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
love this!
z dream chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
my shipper heart is very happy right now :D
Irenerb chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Love it B)
randommonkeyz998 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
:) I also miss spitfire...:'(

Goody story!
Opaul chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
they are adorkable

very nice little oneshot here