Cruel but thanks for the read

Wow, that was absolutely terrificly romantic! :)

It would have been lovely and far more fitting had they come together this way. The Pike arc was ridiculous and unworthy of both of them. Thanks for writing it.

Very nice!

What was that? You said you can't write fluff? Hm. Let's agree to disagree on that ;)

I loved it! Beautiful. If only something like this would ever happen on the show...grr. Anyway, I loved it. Please write more like these :)

Aaww, that was so sweet !

i loved it.

if only something like that could happen on the show...

thanks for this beautiful OS

I don't think this was fluffy at all. It was more of a mood piece, and you created a laid-back, introspective feeling. Nice descriptions. Totally a fantasy fic though, lol. Oh, if only it could be like this on the show.

Lovely fic.

Very sweet ! I loved it !

loved the story...and the ending was outstanding...

And you said you couldn't write fluff ... Haha :) This is great! I loved it!

I read this in the middle of insomnia-times and it really helped my mood :)

I had a little trouble imagining some bits -mainly it had to do with the positions- but the feeling of the relaxed evening, the sun-kissed walk on the beach was very well done. I loved that Jane's mouth had a mind of its own and blurted the words out. And even then, they were suggestive but not incredibly conclusive, yet she got what she meant and he thought she would anyway. Lovely :)

Thank you for the story and I hope to read more romance from you :3

Aww, that was sweet and happy. The episode was a tad bittersweet and angst is ahoy so it's nice to take the happy for just a little while.

I really like your stories! &&& this one too ;D

Ah yes, that would be loevely to see... *sigh*

Wonderful environment. Wish it'd continue though.