I vote for long form. :)

Your prose, especially at the beginning, is crisp and workmanlike but somewhat dry. Rather than telling us, “Elara’s doting irked him,” how about saying something like, “Elara’s clucking tongue and constant nursing made Aric restless.” Also, if Elara is female, Aric calling her “sir” sounds weird. Otherwise, this is an enjoyable oneshot. Try more characterization and action next time.

Love this couple. Hope you do more :D

Totally in character, I absolutely loved it! Also read your other Aric/F Trooper fic, and it was likewise wonderful. Aric has been my favorite romance option from the start, although Corso and Torian come close. It would be wonderful if you did a full fiction, I really enjoy your character and you write Aric's grumpiness perfectly. Thanks for brightening my day!

It's perfect! You characterized Aric very well! I think you should definetly consider continueing writing oneshots or make a story line. Great job!

Hey there!

I like your story. Aric/Female Trooper is one of my favorite SWTOR pairings. Please make more. May I suggest one thing? You could do a multi-chapter story of Aric and the Captain rescuing the Deadeyes. It's just more romanticly. Only a suggestion of course.

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I'd love it if you did more one-shots. Aric needs more love and you write him well!

Whatever you decide to write, I will read it! I love Aric. He's so snarly and fun to write. :) He's featuring prominently in a story I'm working on about my smuggler (which I'm not sure if I will post any time soon - it needs some *major* work before it's readable, and it's pushing 40K words and nowhere near done, ack!).

Jorgan is VERY in character, you captured him perfectly! i hope you write more, there's not enough fanfic out there with him, i haven't run into many F!Trooper/Jorgan stories, unfortunetly. But I love your depictions. If you write more, I'll definitely read it )

A little short, buuuuut...you can fix that by CONTINUING IT! 8D