I've never seen anyone treat Raikou this way. It seems so like him. Thank you.

So cute!

Its really good, I would like to see more of it!

my Celebi knew cut not that long ago. also you should write and Yveltal X Xerneas pairing [ just a suggestion] also did you stop writing because if you did you should get back to writing and share your genius with the world

it was 99.99% right. spinda cafè is a BYOI restaurant [ bring your own ingredients] and they only make drinks that's all. vulpix and shinx plz. [they my pokemon mystery dungeon explorers of sky team] ) [posibly a lemon] )[please]

Woah, Iron Tail with 100 dmg, multiplied by 18, woah, Suicune practically neutered Raikou.

Really good story

Ooooo...18 Iron Tails to the balls must hurt...at least Steel Isn't Very Effective against Electric. I liked this a lot. I'm a fan of Sparkwindshipping, and you mixed romance with humor. I likie! Keep it up! You is my fave author next to Star-Gamer and KirbyGirl! (No offense, I just REALLY love their stories... :/)

Hey this was a good story more please i know its a one shot but can you continue it please?

of course my dear me lover, of course.
that was cute

Awww, so sweet...I love Sparkwindshipping. You did an awesome job!

You are an amazing author! X3 can't wait for. oh and im new so i was wondering can i do my own pokemon pairing? i wont copy you it will be original and my own so dont worry. The pairing is Moltres and Articuno. As you can see by my pen name i LOVE games and tv. So i wont just be doing pokemon. so i hope i talk 2 you again :)

Ooww I hate that feeling when you get hit in the nuts

I thought that this was a very good story. It had everything I like, but why have you been working on 3 or 4 stories at once?

Like it man!